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[vonnie836]

“Bobby….”

Cupping his loosely hanging head in my hands, I slightly shook him, calling his name over and over again, hoping against hope I would receive an answer. The ‘thing’ slithered out of his ear and fell to the ground, wiggling once before lying still. I knew it right then - we succeeded in destroying it, it was dead, but so was Bobby.

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[cece_away]

{{{Oh boys and Bobby!}}}

These tough manyly men break my heart over and over. So much love and forgiveness I feel like I'm floating away on it. Wonderful Vonnie, just wonderful!

[vonnie836]

Thank you so much, I really feel the same way! Hugs, Vonnie

[borgmama1of5]

The alternating first person narrative was very effective in this, and the scenario you portrayed felt like it could have happened that way. Well done!

[vonnie836]

Thank you so much, you made my days. Hugs, Vonnie