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[vonnie836]

Consequences of a Wish

Part 4

It seemed like reliving the memory of this specific incident kept haunting Dean more than any of the others over the next few days. It didn’t matter how much he tried to push it away into the darkest corners of his mind, something he was usually very good at, it kept resurfacing again and again. Finally

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[cece_away]

I hoped if I came over to lj I'd find the rest of this story and wouldn't have to wait on ff. Hee. I have no patience.

Love this. Loved how each flashback moved closer to the present, until it was with Soulless Sam, even as he still saved Dean. And Death, sneaky codger, making him go through that to choose, to know what is really important.

Also, have to say I also enjoyed the mini hunt with the toad/witch. She did a full on wonder woman, flicking the bullet away.

Wonderful, wonderful story, well thought-out and delivered.

[vonnie836]

Wow, so what can I say to this, other than you really made me blush here. Thank you so much. It also made me happy that you were so inpatient and just couldn't wait for more. I am a lot like you, but sometimes I wait on purpose, just because the waiting makes me savor the next chapter so much more. It's like Christmas then. I know I'm silly. Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed the mini hunt. I put some thought into that monster and also it's in real lore, there is not a lot of info, so I had fun making facts up. Wonder woman? Yeah, I remember, she was pretty cool. Hugs, Vonnie

[vail_kagami]

First: Sorry it took me so long to read this, I was travelling and without internet when you posted it.

I love this! I love the near-perfect life you created for Dean, and that he got all the memories to go along with it, and yet always knew what was "real" and "right" for him. Good use of flashbacks, too. And having Death responsible for it - especially setting it in that particular moment when Dean needed to understand something about his brother and himself - was a brilliant idea.

Thank you for filling my prompt so satisfyingly!

[vonnie836]

Don't worry, I know we can't always live online. Real live comes first. I'm just extremely happy that you like this. You are such a wonderful author and the prompt just intrigued me and when I read it was going to be dropped, I just had to have it. As for the setting, it seemed like the perfect time for Dean to make a wish like this. Thank you so much! Hugs, Vonnie