Tell Me What To Do

Apr 24, 2011 16:02

              But as Santana skated out of the locker room, Brittany smiled knowingly.

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Practice was kind of a disaster. Santana couldn’t stop thinking about that look on Brittany’s face when she’d said, “You’re going down on me in the car.” Her concentration was off, she was skating horribly, and by the end of practice she ( Read more... )

tell me what to do, dom!brittany, brittana, sub!santana

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mesoterica April 24 2011, 21:22:27 UTC
Dom!Britt + rollergirl!San = is this heaven? I think this might be heaven...

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vondrunkaton April 26 2011, 00:41:43 UTC
if it is, i definitely want to go! thanks for commenting!

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oh_hail_nah April 24 2011, 21:37:02 UTC
UNF that was so freakin hot. PLZ add more to this!

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vondrunkaton April 26 2011, 00:42:14 UTC
thank you! planning several chapters.

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blueashke April 24 2011, 22:13:31 UTC
Sweeeeeeeeeeet, definitely a good beginning! You're working with a non-trained pair, so make sure to pay attention to the hesitancies on both sides (if you choose to get into both of their heads). This of course gives you some of the opportunities that don't work in mine since I'm working with a trained Dom.

I'll definitely keep reading this one babe, keep it up! :)

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vondrunkaton April 26 2011, 00:43:39 UTC
thank you so much for commenting and for the advice and inspiration! i'll for sure highlight hesitancies and first time stuff. one of the reasons i wanted to write this fic. so many interesting first feelings to explore. :)

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jacs1010 April 24 2011, 23:15:23 UTC
I agree with Brittany that was totally hot!

More Please!

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vondrunkaton April 26 2011, 00:43:54 UTC
thank you!

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meatisadelicacy April 25 2011, 01:14:48 UTC
hot. can't wait for more.

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vondrunkaton April 26 2011, 00:44:09 UTC
thanks! soon.

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