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vondrunkaton

kissing quinn fabray, chapter four

Jul 16, 2011 22:06

A/N: Alright, kids. Here's chapter four. It's long. Over 10k words and eighteen pages, single spaced. I have cut it apart and patched it back together five times. If there are glaring errors, apologies all around - ten thousand words is a lot to sift through in one go. As always, thank you to everyone who has read and commented and favorited. ( Read more... )

faberry, kissing quinn fabray

Comments 15

mm_burnttoast July 17 2011, 05:15:12 UTC

Yeah, so I might be kinda in love with this story. It's written beautifully and I absolutely adore how sweet, shy and cute Rachel and Quinn are around each other. They're totally meant to be and just.. perfect. And I also really like how Quinn just doesn't care what anybody else has to say anymore. :D

ayden07 July 17 2011, 05:23:43 UTC

This chapter is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!! It is romantic and funny and so passionate. Quinn wants to be with Rachel and Rachel will be her strength. Quinn will be Rachel's protector. Its just beautiful the way you write them together. I love this chapter the most!!! Great writing! I only hope things go well come Monday at school for our girls. =)

blissfully_kist July 17 2011, 05:24:00 UTC

I am so in love with this story, it is so sweet and sensual and so very well written and the pace is realistic. This is definitely one of my most favorite Faberry stories ever. I'm really looking forward to more. ^.^

lytab5 July 17 2011, 08:54:14 UTC

I'm actually kind of speechless right now.
So let me just say that I agree WITH EVERYTHING IN THIS COMMENT! ♥♥♥

And I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

blissfully_kist July 17 2011, 23:38:49 UTC

Yeah, this chapter was just..amazing, as is the story in general. It really is hard to express how damn awesome it is, the word flow, the characterizations, the intense yet sweet feeings for each other..everything. :)

lytab5 July 18 2011, 05:39:06 UTC

Just this!
The wonderful words of this story create this precious bubble of warmth and love and butterflies. It's quite difficult to find the right words myself to describe my feelings while reading this story. All seem simply inadequate and pale in comparison to what's in this story.

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lauraluvscasey July 17 2011, 05:31:28 UTC

These two are so fucking adorable

mjacton July 17 2011, 17:57:32 UTC

I really don't know how to say how much I enjoy this.

I like that Quinn is so cheesy...including how she wanted to ask Rachel's dads for permission to sit in the parlor. Somehow, it fits with how I think Rachel would affect Quinn.

Love it!