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vondark

DIALOGES-a converstation

Sep 04, 2006 23:35

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midnight garden azarlon_warrior September 4 2006, 14:01:06 UTC

I gaze burnt like pieces of acid digested through cake ( ... )

word breath vondark September 11 2006, 14:44:10 UTC

imaginary images exquisite ( ... )

Re: word breath azarlon_warrior September 19 2006, 16:30:27 UTC

This is mega. One of the freshest poems I've read in a bit....definitely a fav from what I've read on this page
Top topic.....as I can relate in many ways....and feel similar about writing, listening and breathing being a lot more than what the average take them for, and what can be manufactured from them or just the beauty of life which they uphold.
The passion that which you wrote with stood out.
Bonus marks if I was to grade it because I love the smell of jasmine in spring and summer evenings....well anytime.

final steps azarlon_warrior September 16 2006, 05:04:51 UTC

words discredit actions I rode the unicorn high into the sunset and came out with burnt hair ( ... )

astounded bedazzled vondark September 16 2006, 14:19:48 UTC

look what we have here ( ... )

Re: final steps vondark October 13 2006, 13:39:28 UTC

I shed words to grow later

continued ground azarlon_warrior September 17 2006, 14:03:21 UTC

we spoke in the garden underneath the end of the world disguised as failing light ( ... )

crystal memories azarlon_warrior September 18 2006, 14:19:22 UTC

at the first taste we scream shouting thoughts like feelings
I hope your alright, I cry as I could feel your hand leaving
I fall like arrows had struck me down
words left like smiles wiped off the faces of clowns
felt like your touch was no longer around, my body layed still stretched out on the ground
dreams like tattered banners that had fallen without a sound

I gained clarity realized I had lost my senses
the people around me torn down like broken fences
Saw your hand holding mine gave me strength as I shouted to raise the Defences
eclipsed like stares between us and the words that (our eyes) they mentioned
storys told through a glance
fires littered the ground as survivors ran past
Golden towers sat in ruins but I was no stranger to this dance
grasped hope like a lance rode off into the hills of wisdom to take my chance

we stood in the garden underneath the end of the world disguised as failing light

crystal flowers vondark September 18 2006, 15:03:53 UTC

the light failed and spread shadows in small spaces ( ... )

my second continue azarlon_warrior September 19 2006, 10:17:47 UTC

I went away rode towards a clearer day ( ... )

the dark vondark September 25 2006, 15:07:38 UTC

because of the times to sit all alone and relish it ( ... )