The Red Collar (Ten/Simm!Master, NC-18)

Jul 17, 2010 11:36

Title: The Red Collar
Author: von_gelmini
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Ten/Simm!Master
Rating: NC-18
WordCount: 2163
Warnings: explicit sex, D/s, public sex, BDSM
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who. I am not writing this for profit.

Written for lover100 table C prompt #25 - Dominant. Also written for kink_bingo prompt - Obedience. And for ( Read more... )

fandom: doctor who, character: ten, character: simm!master, pairing: ten/simm!master, contains: d/s, rating: nc-17, genre: slash, contains: bdsm

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silvermoon_06 July 17 2010, 17:03:28 UTC
Oh, wow, that was positively very sexy and extremely erotic! I simply love how Ten was in control of the Master in this, that was brilliant! Well done, you! :D

You really did a magnificent job with this, it is so deliciously wicked! I love how submissive and obedient the Master was for Ten, and his blushes were really quite adorable.

I loved the bit where Ten purchased that special dildo, and ordered the Master to prepare it and himself; It was really quite thrilling to see he had that crowd around him as he shoved the thing inside him.

The bit in the cafe was my favorite! The Master certainly got what he deserved for being disobedient! He he. Ten was just so wicked and gorgeous when he made the Master sit on him in front of everyone.

You have really outdone yourself with this one, I loved it to bits. I think I need to go have a cold shower now, if you will excuse me. He he. :D Thanks again. :D

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von_gelmini July 17 2010, 17:09:58 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. As you can see, I never did get to bed yet, but your lovely comment makes the missed sleep so worth it =D

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silvermoon_06 July 17 2010, 17:15:23 UTC
Awe *blushes* thank you! And, you are so very welcome! Awe, I see that, but I know it is hard to sleep when you are wanting to write. I haven't had a chance for my catnap either, maybe later, yeah? :D

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alt_universe_me July 17 2010, 17:32:35 UTC
Wow! This was certainly interesting :)

I have to admit, what stood out the most was this exchange:

“You call your slave Master?” the merchant asked.

“It’s ironic,” the Doctor said.

It might not have been your intent, but that part had me giggling like mad. It's perfect, so succinct.

This was pretty hot, too. Sex in public isn't generally my thing, but embarrassing the Master by belting his arse in public, well, that's pretty effing awesome.

I liked how you created a setting for this as well, with the sex toy market in everything. Is it in the 51st century? I have a theory, and a couple fics in progress that explore how the 51st century is basically full of sex shops and is sex sex sex all the time :)

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von_gelmini July 18 2010, 00:14:45 UTC
Thanks! I thought that line was funny too. :) I suppose it could be 51st C, because it is a pretty wild time according to Jack, and I can definitely imagine Jack having been with the Doctor here before and that being how he knew about it to take the Master there.

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head_o_rainbows July 17 2010, 17:58:29 UTC
Groan. If you need me I'll be taking a cold shower. that was so so erotic

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von_gelmini July 18 2010, 00:15:10 UTC
Thanks so much. :D

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mind_the_tardis July 17 2010, 19:29:26 UTC
I think the Master's title (combined with his Doctor obsession) just about speaks for itself, that he would secretly get a kick out of being slave/submissive. Poor man, he doth protest too much.

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von_gelmini July 18 2010, 00:17:27 UTC
Yeah, the whole time I was writing it, I kinda expected the Master-Muse to pipe up and object at some point, but he never did. Of course that's just made my Dom!Ten-Muse stronger. And I really want to finish my Dom!Master story, but hey, what the author wants to write doesn't matter to those pushy Muses.

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mind_the_tardis July 18 2010, 04:28:24 UTC
You haven't written a D!Master one yet? Well. Says the person who barely ever writes fic >_>

I tend to see Simm!Master as a dominant who's using the role as cover (i.e., if he really got down to his id, he'd be submissive, to the Doctor, at least), and Ten as a submissive. But that's only when I'm not writing the Doctor. The instant I get on the writing end of a Ten, the submission goes right out the window. So it's interesting, to me, to read fic with the submissive role described explicitly-hell, it's interesting to read explicit BDSM fic in general. It's a dynamic I find hard to write, but central to Doctor/Master, I think, in any reading of their relationship and roles.

Rambling! Or, Doctor/Master + BDSM = *thinking hat*

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von_gelmini July 18 2010, 18:04:01 UTC
Usually I write them as Dom!Master/sub!ten, and I've just been wanting to get back to that because it's my favorite and I have several bunnies stewing on the back burner for that pairing. (plot bunny stew... it's what's for dinner!)

I spent 13 years as a bottom in a 24/7 bdsm relationship. So writing that is like 2nd nature to me. I try every now and then to do a bit from the top-headspace but that is so hard to do. I have tried to top before but I just find it so boring! I just don't understand the motivation, but I do appreciate it in someone else ;D

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criminalkitten July 17 2010, 22:00:54 UTC
so very very hawt. That collar was so decidedly wicked. I'm so glad that somewhere in the universe there is a market where Masters and slaves can go shopping together =) I can totally imagine the Master performing for the crowd, he loves the attention so much. Thanks for another great story.

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von_gelmini July 18 2010, 00:22:42 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it. ;D

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