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UPDATE.
Jan 07, 2008 16:18
I am Derek. I am lame. I am updating my LiveJournal. This is the current status of my life (
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anonymous
January 31 2008, 00:24:21 UTC
"it was everything to which I've ever beaten off"
off it still a preposition. you may want to choose a one word synonym.
(as a writing tutor, i'm trained to look at the grammar and ignore content, no matter how disturbing)
<3 megan
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imaxed5770
April 1 2008, 14:14:11 UTC
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elfiemarielle
December 19 2009, 05:59:27 UTC
....O_o
Impressed,regardless.
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off it still a preposition. you may want to choose a one word synonym.
(as a writing tutor, i'm trained to look at the grammar and ignore content, no matter how disturbing)
<3 megan
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Impressed,regardless.
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