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Fic: Clean Sweep

Jan 10, 2010 23:16

For bradygirl_12 's birthday request! It took a little while to get all written up, between computer problems and unfriendly writing conditions, but it's finally here! I don't know if this is anything like what you were thinking about, but I hope it pleases!

Title: Clean Sweep
Author: Singer
Characters: Bruce, Dick, Alfred, Ollie, Hal, Barry
Pairings: n/a
Rating ( Read more... )

hal, bruce, ollie, dick, barry, alfred

Comments 15

bradygirl_12 January 11 2010, 17:05:06 UTC

Yay for birthday fic! :)

Aww, so sweet! How can Wee!Dick not be sweet? ;)

Definitely a giggle over Dick's 'influence': heh heh.

I loved the part about Alfred allowing him to swing from the chandelier as long as he polished the crystal. ;)

And the imitation of an elephant (Zitka!) was sweet. :)

Bruce worrying over Dick is what I like to see! :)

Thanks for this lovely story, Singer! :)

vocallight January 11 2010, 20:07:54 UTC

Yay for birthday fic! :)

n_n

Aww, so sweet! How can Wee!Dick not be sweet? ;)

He might as well be made of cotton candy!

Definitely a giggle over Dick's 'influence': heh heh.

Just one more bonus of being on his team! (or having your kid on his team) :P

I loved the part about Alfred allowing him to swing from the chandelier as long as he polished the crystal. ;)

They get the best of both worlds! I'll bet that chandelier has never been as shiny in all of Wayne Manor history.

And the imitation of an elephant (Zitka!) was sweet. :)

I kind of just love the idea of Dickie playing with one of Bruce's sweater. (And who doesn't love Zitka?)

Bruce worrying over Dick is what I like to see! :)

Uh huh! He's being a good bat-daddy. ^-^

Thanks for this lovely story, Singer! :)

You're welcome! I'm so glad you loved it Brady!

bradygirl_12 January 11 2010, 23:13:41 UTC

Aww, so sweet! How can Wee!Dick not be sweet? ;)

He might as well be made of cotton candy!

Very true! :)

They get the best of both worlds! I'll bet that chandelier has never been as shiny in all of Wayne Manor history.

*laughs*

And the imitation of an elephant (Zitka!) was sweet. :)

I kind of just love the idea of Dickie playing with one of Bruce's sweater. (And who doesn't love Zitka?)

Love Zitka! :)

Bruce worrying over Dick is what I like to see! :)

Uh huh! He's being a good bat-daddy. ^-^

Oh, yes! :)

Thanks for this lovely story, Singer! :)

You're welcome! I'm so glad you loved it Brady!

Wee!Dick is a winner every time! :)

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vocallight January 11 2010, 23:49:40 UTC

Oh, i love the idea of Dick having such an influence over his team mates that their mentors start talking about it like that, lol! And Bruce secretly smiling to himself about it all was the icing on top XD

I love the idea of heros gossiping like neighborhood moms! And there can never be enough smiles for Bruce! n_n

This was adorable, and so Dick! Great work here ^_^

Glad you liked it so much Zenith!

ani_bester January 12 2010, 01:14:01 UTC

Oh dear gosh this was adorable. I wondered where you were going, and showing Dick as a good influence, not just a good leader was wonderful.

That was heart meltingly sweet. Thank you ^__^

vocallight January 12 2010, 02:12:57 UTC

Oh dear gosh this was adorable. I wondered where you were going, and showing Dick as a good influence, not just a good leader was wonderful.

Yay! I'm so glad to hear that that came across clearly. (I was worried about that) I really like showing the little things.

That was heart meltingly sweet. Thank you ^__^

You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it so much!