Fic: Team Mascot

Apr 07, 2009 15:25

 Just decided to do something cute. Please enjoy!

Title: Team Mascot
Author: Singer
Characters: Dick, Bruce, Alfred, Roy, Donna, Wally, Garth, Clark, and many other Leaguers.
Pairings: None, some slight suggestions if you squint.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not my Characters...*le sigh*
Warnings:  Nothing major, unbeta-ed
Summary:  An unexpected surprise shows ( Read more... )

donna, dick, alfred, garth, roy, bruce, wally, clark

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aileencross April 7 2009, 21:14:18 UTC
Aww, this is so cute! :D

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vocallight April 7 2009, 21:18:36 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

n_n

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bradygirl_12 April 7 2009, 22:12:46 UTC
LOL! This is so sweet! :)

Your characterizations are spot on! Dick's energy comes across nicely, and the sunny exchange of smiles with Clark is perfect! :)

These lines had me smiling:

Apparently, Diana had had a lovely evening with Steve despite finding the play they attended a bit dry. Ollie was making a bet he couldn’t win with Hal. J’onn needs to pick up more Oreos. The King of Atlantis had to attend a council meeting to decide the color of Mera’s dress for an upcoming feast? He pitied Arthur. Formal fittings couldn’t be fun, no matter where they happened.

Very clever! I could hear the heroes discussing these things. Good touch of humor, like so many instances in your story.

The banter was fun, and I liked the little detail of Clark knowing that Bruce didn't like not knowing where Dick was.

Klah sounded adorable! And Dick taking care of him with his fellow Titans' help was sweet.

As are these lines:

And even though Dick never did find any more hitchhikers on his suits, every now and then he would notice small catches ( ... )

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vocallight April 8 2009, 00:47:30 UTC
LOL! This is so sweet! :)

Your characterizations are spot on! Dick's energy comes across nicely, and the sunny exchange of smiles with Clark is perfect! :)

Thanks! They are sunny boys!

These lines had me smiling:

Apparently, Diana had had a lovely evening with Steve despite finding the play they attended a bit dry. Ollie was making a bet he couldn’t win with Hal. J’onn needs to pick up more Oreos. The King of Atlantis had to attend a council meeting to decide the color of Mera’s dress for an upcoming feast? He pitied Arthur. Formal fittings couldn’t be fun, no matter where they happened.

Very clever! I could hear the heroes discussing these things. Good touch of humor, like so many instances in your story.

I seem to picture them hanging out the way my family does during big reunions, for some reason.

The banter was fun, and I liked the little detail of Clark knowing that Bruce didn't like not knowing where Dick was.

I always enjoyed the Clark-Bruce dynamic.

Klah sounded adorable! And Dick taking care of him with his fellow ( ... )

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bradygirl_12 April 8 2009, 01:07:47 UTC
I always enjoyed the Clark-Bruce dynamic.

This is true World's Finest gold:

Clark noted the lines of tension forming in Bruce’s shoulders. He knew he didn’t like it when he didn’t know where Dick was. That boy had brought so much light into his life. Slowly he had opened up to the little bird, and now he was even beginning to open up to Clark as well.

Dick definitely helped Clark, too, by getting Bruce to open up. :)

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vocallight April 8 2009, 01:11:38 UTC
I miss seeing all of the boys together. They're not called the World's Finest for nothing!

I personally think that that adding Dick is just about one of the best things DC did for its characters.

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vocallight April 8 2009, 00:49:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!

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mithen April 8 2009, 00:07:19 UTC
Aw! This captured the feeling of the Teen Titans so wonderfully...everyone had such distinctive voices and the overall tone was so lighthearted and fun, I loved it!

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vocallight April 8 2009, 00:52:25 UTC
They're so much fun to write! I've found that I like writing little cutesy ones as much as dramatic pieces.

Thank you Mithen!

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northern_star April 8 2009, 00:55:25 UTC
awwww! That was totally adorable! Thanks for sharing! :D

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vocallight April 8 2009, 01:06:28 UTC
Thank you! Anytime I can find one.

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