Chapter 16: Those Magic Words

[offtheceiling]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 128,589
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 16: Those Magic Words
Author: rachel_shanz and truemyth
Additional Characters: Dick, Colleen Sharpe, John Sharpe

Comments

[yourwinter0319]

OMG! Yall did an amazing chapter! Can't wait til next week! THis is one of those stories that you read over and over again!! THank you so much for doing this guys

[offtheceiling]

Thanks so much! I know all the writers involved really appreciate readers like you!

[truemyth]

Boy you are very fast! It's great to hear that you're loving the story so much.

[brandyleigh]

I'm glad Veronica finally told Logan how she feels. And I enjoyed the MoTW as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[offtheceiling]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked this chapter and I hope you like the next one just as much!

[truemyth]

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're liking the story so much, especially the MotWs. I hope we continue to meet your expectations.

[saramitra]

oh wow!! YEY!! *dances wildly* that last scene was great. you=love.
I really wanna hear veronica say those words to logan on the show..

I'm not sure exactly why but this made me teehee:
Logan raised an eyebrow. “Well, that was unexpected,” he muttered.

I have to say, the MotW's solution was really unexpected.. and creepy. *shudders* Great chapter you guys!

[offtheceiling]

I really wanna hear veronica say those words to logan on the show..

Yes, I think this goes for all of us!

Thanks so much! We really appreciate the feedback!

[truemyth]

I'm glad you liked it and I loved that line too. Rachel wrote so many great ones in this chapter but that's one I could really see happening on the show with either Veronica or Logan speaking.

I'm glad we were able to surprise you a bit and I hope it wasn't too creepy for you. Thanks for reading!

[kattine]

aww sweet ending. loved the part!

[offtheceiling]

Thank you! We really appreciate the feedback!

[truemyth]

I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks for reading!

[tmt_catalyst]

OMG, HAPPY ENDING. Even though it's not the real ending. BUT IT WAS HAPPY.

YAY!

[offtheceiling]

Bwee! Yay for happy endings!

Thanks so much for the comment!

[truemyth]

Yay for happy!