Confessions Of A Dangerus Mind (Don Lamb, R/FRM)

[thewaughnman]

Title: Confessions Of A Dangerous Mind
Author: thewaughnman

Pairing/Character: Don Lamb, possible Lamb/Veronica undertones

Word Count: 1001

Rating: R

Summary: Some of the series’ events and a certain teen-sleuth seen through the eyes of one Don Lamb.

Spoilers: ‘There’s a little something for everyone’, which means for both seasons.

Warnings:

Comments

[afrocurl]

Ah, Lamb--ever the ass.

I like how you got into Lamb's head so well--it really worked well with this.

Of course Veronica has to be annoying to him, but it wouldn't be Neptune without it.

One small nitpick--Leo left the Sheriff's office after he sold the Aaron/Lilly tapes to Logan. I'm sure Sacks would have told him about the Grand, though.

Good job!

[sarah_p]

Very cool use of the prompt. The whole Don Lamb: Priceless (that’s what he thinks, too) Visa ad was really well done. Heeee.

Also, I'm kind of in love with:

Veronica ‘I’m everywhere’ Mars.

HA. So, so perfect.

[defybrevity]

This was cute. I always love me a little Lamb every now and then, and the "Don Lamb: priceless" was so... well, priceless. The only problem I'd say I have is that you didn't mention Keith and him "dying," which would have obviously been a topic of discussion when Logan and Veronica talked to the police. But that's just me nitpicking. You did a lovely job, especially for your first VM fic. :)

[laiquendai]

enjoyed the mastercard advert moment!! It was brilliant for a first fic - you really got into lambs head.