FIC- What Goes Around... (Mac/Dick)

[leobrat]

Title: What Goes Around...
Author: ashleigh (leobrat)
Pairing/Characters: Mac/Dick
Rating: NC-17
Summary: As if he hasn't taken enough...
Spoilers/Warnings: Set during Mac and Dick's first spring break at Hearst, spoils everything up to now, just to be safe. very harsh language and graphic sexual situations.
Author's Notes: I wrote this for the vm_library

Comments

[rindee]

Hey! I read this, and left comments, when you posted for the vm_library challenge, so I was a bit confused to see it here at vm_betas. Having reread it just now, I saw a couple of little tiny things I might change, but on the whole, I think it's really right just the way it is. I'd love to talk about your fic, though, if you are looking to go further with the story - drop me an email or find me on YIM or AIM, my sn is rindee1313, it's also my email - rindee1313@aol.com.

[leobrat]

Hi! I hope that you don't think I didn't value the vm_library feedback, because I totally do, just this one was a *stretch* for me, so I really wanted to know if people thought things could be improved. I'm waiting on my vmwhat_if prompt on this, so I am curious what direction people would like for it to go? Should it be more hopeful? Is the darkness its distinction?

I love to chat about fic and writing in general, so I would definitely love to chat some time! My aim is LeopardB8, and my email is ashleigh.fang@gmail.com

[rindee]

No - I didn't mean to suggest you disregarded the previous comments, I just wasn't sure if you were looking for con crit on this piece, or simply thoughts about where you might to with it. I'll at work now, but I'll look you up later - when I've had time to think about it, if that's okay? :D

[leobrat]

Oh you're a doll, thank you very much. I'm at work now too (and being very productive, as you can see...)