Comments | vjs2259: A Lock of Hair (B5, J/D, rated G)

vjs2259

A Lock of Hair (B5, J/D, rated G)

Feb 09, 2011 07:09

This is part of a loosely connected series that I labelled Season of No Shadows over at ff.net. Here I jokingly called it the Randy Teenagers series. The premise is that it's Season Two, and we have various couples in love, and nothing else is going on but that. The Harlequin romance version of the B5 universe if you will. Delenn did under go the ( Read more... )

fanfiction, valentine's day, j/d, b5, s2

Comments 9

nhpw February 9 2011, 14:12:01 UTC

*sigh* Love this. So sweet and so "this is how it should have gone." As soon as John took the brush from her I thought, "I bet he used to brush his sister's hair."

Wonderful, wonderful job.

vjs2259 February 12 2011, 21:32:11 UTC

Somebody should have done something with her hair, that's for sure. I have sisters, no brothers, but hair is always being discussed. Some of it must have rubbed off on John.

kungfuwaynewho February 9 2011, 18:13:24 UTC

Aw, this is just lovely. I'm a sucker for guys brushing girls' hair.

vjs2259 February 12 2011, 21:32:44 UTC

"I'm a sucker for guys brushing girls' hair.'

Me, too.Thanks.

alexcat February 9 2011, 21:59:24 UTC

I found it so wistful and sweet. I can see it happening too because I always thought John was such a sweetheart when he was with Delenn. Wonderful story!

vjs2259 February 12 2011, 21:33:15 UTC

He's a big lunk, but sweet with it. Thank you!

startufflover February 10 2011, 19:35:21 UTC

I totally love it, I love how sweet the story is, and how sweet John is in it. really like it. Thanks for that...now I have to go back to work :'(

vjs2259 February 12 2011, 21:34:07 UTC

Thank you! It's nice to have a break from work, isn't it?

anonymous February 11 2011, 14:44:13 UTC

I have to admit, I'm a sucker for this particular trope and you've written a lovely little story here.