Comments | vjs2259: Dual Minds (B5, J/D, rated G, gapfiller)

vjs2259

Dual Minds (B5, J/D, rated G, gapfiller)

Mar 18, 2010 20:41

This is a re-write of an old story, one where I truly loved the idea behind it, but was less than thrilled with the execution. I seldom re-visit stories, but I didn't feel I did this one justice, and since we are coming up on War Without End in the B5 re-watch, it seemed time. I'm not sure I'm completely done with it, but here is a newer, and ( Read more... )

re-write, j/d, b5, s3

Comments 5

expressio_unius March 19 2010, 19:51:08 UTC

I'd never read this before, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I do miss John/Delenn! Thanks for working on it and sharing!

vjs2259 March 21 2010, 11:02:15 UTC

I don't write so much straight J/D these days, but they are still a fixation. Thank you for reading.

nolivingman March 19 2010, 22:48:30 UTC

That's a better ending, yes. I really do like the rework.

vjs2259 March 21 2010, 11:00:46 UTC

Thank you. Did you know the Lord Chancellor of England was the Keeper of the King's Conscience? And Steven Brust has an office of Discreet, a person who hears the King's secret thoughts. Of course there's Hamlet...sorry, I'm in love with that phrase right now.

delenntoo March 28 2010, 23:22:37 UTC

This was familiar as I read it, but the ending wasn't - I LOVE it! Especially that last line - that was amazing.

Now on to read the next 3 parts ...