"slow burn, slow decay"

Sep 02, 2010 21:50

Title: slow burn, slow decay
Fandom: Inception.
Characters: Ariadne, Arthur, Eames.
Word Count: 4935
Rating: 15
Summary: Ariadne tries, tries so hard, and the only person she keeps letting down is herself. Arthur/Ariadne.
Warnings: BDD (see prompt), eating disorder, some language
Notes: Written for hc_bingo (my bingo card is lurking here), for the prompt ( Read more... )

i now pair arthur/ariadne, hurt/comfort in challenge form, kick yourself out of the dream, i now write, playing in other people's sandboxes

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flyingmachine September 2 2010, 22:02:24 UTC
Fantastic. I love your descriptions and formatting as always, and they work brilliantly for Inception-verse. (IMO anyways..)

And now that you've tackled BDD, someone should prompt you with BIID. ;) I think you'd have fun with that.

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vixys September 2 2010, 22:11:22 UTC
I write in a flowingly weird kind of style, I've found, and it feels Inceptiony. Or something. *hugs* ♥ *googles* Ooh, BIID sounds like it'd be a tough one. :D Well, for the hc_bingo card, I have a Wild Card, so maybe. Hmm.

So, twas good? ♥

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flyingmachine September 2 2010, 23:58:40 UTC
It definitely has the Inception vibe. :)))

But yes, it was wonderful. <3 You did good!

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lovelylytton September 2 2010, 22:53:16 UTC
I love this. The phone call with Arthur and Eames near the end almost broke me, but in a good way.

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vixys September 3 2010, 09:50:23 UTC
*hugs* Thank you. ♥

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eustacia_vye28 September 3 2010, 02:40:39 UTC
I am in near tears with how painful and perfect this is. It's a torturous path Ariadne's on in this, and I can feel her break to pieces. I love how real this is, how there is no quick fix for something like this. BDD and eating disorders are insidious, and they don't go away overnight.

Thank you so much for writing this.

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vixys September 3 2010, 09:52:39 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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civillove September 3 2010, 03:29:01 UTC
this was beautiful <3

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vixys September 3 2010, 09:52:57 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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lei_che_sogna September 3 2010, 07:36:15 UTC
Wow. That was amazing. Ouchy, but amazing.

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vixys September 3 2010, 09:53:16 UTC
*hugs* Thank you. ♥

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