"pattycake, pattycake"

[vixys]

Title: pattycake, pattycake
Fandom: The Eagle.
Characters: Marcus&Esca.
Word Count: 2164.
Rating: 15.
Summary: Esca hasn’t been eating. Marcus has taken too long to notice. Marcus/Esca; some Marcus/Cottia.
Warnings: implied eating disorder; major character death
Notes: Written for the Fanmedia Challenge over at ninth_eagle, based on the image of bread.

Comments

[poziomeczka]

I SOUNDED THE SQUEE ALARM.

and god, you're not really tired of breaking out hearts, are you?
this was so stunningly sad and so beautiful.

[vixys]

I TRIED TO MAKE IT HAPPY. IT WAS GOING TO BE HAPPY. Then everything went horribly wrong. :( ♥ Although, your icon is severely distracting.

[coeurdesoleil]

Oh god you seem determined to make me cry my heart out every time you post a new fic ;_;

Your prose is stunning, as always, and the story is beautiful, haunting, heartbreaking.

[vixys]

Sorry, sorry, sorry. ♥ And thank you.

[riventhorn]

Oh, that was heartbreaking! Such strong emotions, and the dialogue was excellent. It expressed their feelings in a way that felt natural in that awkward, fumbling way that I think is so typical of real conversations about difficult things.

Victory is almost yours--only one more round to go!! :D

[vixys]

felt natural in that awkward, fumbling way Thank you. ♥

[aeroport_art]

OH MY GOD. BROKEN HEART. Thanks a lot.

No but really, what magnificent writing. Every sentence is full of hurt and yearning and hopelessness. Great stuff.

[vixys]

Thank you. ♥

[babydracky]

;o;
That was really beautiful, really, but... *cries*

[vixys]

Thank you. ♥