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An Exchange of Vows: Chapter Four

Jul 13, 2008 10:35

An Exchange of Vows
Chapter Four

Author: Violet
Chapter Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Guy/Marian (Robin/Marian)
Canon: Up to 2.10, "Walkabout"
Summary: Marian brokers a deal for Nottingham and England.

Note: This chapter contains adult material and is not suitable for readers under the age of eighteen ( Read more... )

guy/marian, fanfiction, an exchange of vows

Comments 34

an_lagat_glas July 13 2008, 16:57:23 UTC

Ooh, excellent and plotty. It was a bit hard to read Guy talking about possessing her, but, I think, true to his character.

vividviolet83 July 15 2008, 14:53:59 UTC

It was a little hard to write, too, I'll admit. As much as those of us who like Guy/Marian want to imagine that he'd be sweet and kind and good to her, I think that's a little unrealistic. Like you said, we've seen a very different Guy on the show, and those shades of darkness aren't going to go away after a wedding.

dantedreamer July 13 2008, 17:06:09 UTC

Another fantastic chapter! I really like the fact that Marian hasn't suddenly done an about-face and fallen madly for Guy... yet. Her reluctance gives the whole scenario a realistic quality.

Looking impatiently forward to the next chapter! : )

vividviolet83 July 15 2008, 14:57:38 UTC

Glad you liked it! I'm glad that Marian's reactions to Guy are ringing true for you. I just can't ever completely buy scenarios that have her forgetting all about Robin just because Guy snogs her a few times. ;)

cila81 July 13 2008, 17:31:25 UTC

Great chapter! I love the way you portray the characters, and Marian's reluctance, it will make it so much sweeter when she finally gives in to Guy completely :)

vividviolet83 July 15 2008, 14:58:33 UTC

Thank you! I think it will make for a sweeter payoff in the end, hopefully. :)

vivrelavie July 13 2008, 17:44:53 UTC

Fantastic as always. I really love the way you're going with this plot line. :)

vividviolet83 July 15 2008, 14:59:11 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

carmine_rose July 13 2008, 18:28:55 UTC

Oh, Marian! You do love him! Honestly, girl!

This is so good! It's got plot and sex and everything. You really capture Marian's feelings brilliantly. And your Guy is completely in character - I can't quite decide if he knew what he was doing with the whole Locksley stunt, though.

And oh God, the Night Watchman stuff! I hate to say it, but I wouldn't put it past Robin at all.

vividviolet83 July 15 2008, 15:01:03 UTC

Sadly, I think she's not going to figure that out for a while yet. :)

Oh, Guy and the Locksley stunt ... to be quite honest, I'm not sure whether he really was just taking her to the only place available or if he got off on de-virginizing Robin Hood's girl in Robin Hood's bed. I could totally see it going either way.

The Nightwatchman stuff ... hm. Stay tuned. ;)