Chasing Jailbait

[vivid_butterfly]

Title: Chasing Jailbait
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sulu/Chekov
Summary: Sulu never imagined doing what he knew was right, would feel so terrible.
Notes: Written for the st_xi_kink

Comments

[serenity_winner]

Um, okay. Ouch.

(Can I convince you to do a sequel? haha)

But seriously, I really enjoyed this. Bittersweet. Nice work.

[vivid_butterfly]

Your icon makes me unspeakably happy. <3

I'll see what I can do sequel wise. I still can't promise a sequel will be happy either and I don't want to cause you MORE pain.

[serenity_winner]

Well I suppose I can handle a little bit of heartbreak if it means more great fic. :D

[echoinautumn]

Um, totally seconding the request for a sequel ;_;

This is gorgeous, but ow.

[vivid_butterfly]

I'll see what I can do sequel-wise. It might also be a bit sad, just fair warning.

[speccygeekgrrl]

;_;!

And this is why realism is sad. Really good, but really sad.

I'm actually trying to write a court-martial fic for just this reason (goddamn kink meme, writing legal issues is way harder than writing porn!), and I couldn't think of a better term than 'statutory rape', so thank you for providing me with 'fraternization with an underage officer,' I never would have figured that one out. xD

[vivid_butterfly]

Oh my god. Link me to that when you finish it! I saw the prompt, and wanted to read it, but I was just like "I would have to do too much research and watch too much Law and Order: SVU to get the legal proceedings down, so I'll wait for someone else."

Yeah, definetly going to be heartbreaking reading that one. Because, probably even if he gets aquited for charges that is going to follow him. He'd probably have to leave the military and go do something else and yeah. Anyway. I want to read it when you finish. :)

[speccygeekgrrl]

Oh god, please don't expect it to be all angsty or anything, I am epic fail at sad endings. And I never ever ever watch Law and Order so I am basically pulling the whole thing out of a black hole. xD;;

[vivid_butterfly]

Hahaha. Fair enough. :)

I couldn't quite not get it sad in my head (I fail at happy endings. Hahaha.) another reason I was like "Noooo. Someone else write it."

[greenteaduck]

I love this! Especially Sulu fighting his feelings to do what's "right"-- guh, I love it!

The ending was so good and sad~ Amazing fic^^

[vivid_butterfly]

<3 Thank you very much.

There's that old saying that the right thing to do is usually not the eays one, or however it goes. Sulu is still trying to figure out why the right thing feels wrong AND sucks so much.

[mizufae]

Ow my heart! It has broken!
This was written really well; simply and with very little pretense, description in the places that needed it and not where it didn't. I'd love to see a sequel that investigates further, even if it breaks my heart over again.

[vivid_butterfly]

It very much might, but I do have an idea for one.