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visiblemarket

Fading In, Part III: .07%

Nov 28, 2008 21:07

Part III: .07%
Rating: PG13
Characters: Claude, Abigail, Lee, Sarah (OFC); Peter mentioned
Genre: Fairly heavy hints of Abigail/Lee and Claude/Peter, but nothing conclusive or explicit
Spoilers: For both parts of Sum Quod Sum, and the end of S1 ( Read more... )

claude, fading in, fic:heroes

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gingerberrysnap November 29 2008, 03:08:05 UTC

I love all of these still. And Sarah is fabulous. :)

visiblemarket November 29 2008, 03:14:49 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you think so. I kinda love her.

gingerberrysnap November 29 2008, 04:32:47 UTC

It saddens me that she's not a real character. She needs to come back with Claude, or at least be in the graphic novel. I can really picture her as CT, also. So you're doing a great job with the voice.

I want to say something more coherent, but after most of the day at work I apparently only have energy to write comment porn and round robin porn. *laughs*

BTW, any sign-ups for the exchange yet? I need to decide what I want to request.

visiblemarket November 29 2008, 04:38:49 UTC

It saddens me too. I just really, really want to see CT and CE together, I'll admit. And thank you, that's good to hear :D

Aww, don't worry about it. You and c_quinn still doing comment porn? I really liked your last part of the round robin porn.

Yes, there are! It's rather exciting. Although one person commented, and then deleted their comment, so...I'm not sure what that means.

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lotus0kid November 29 2008, 04:20:32 UTC

Ooh, now we're getting into the meat of things a bit! "I made a mistake," huh? A mistake by trying to help Peter, or by ditching him, hmmmm?

Terrible accident at the zoo. Or Africa, never shoulda gotten out of the jeep-
Like that. Funny, but with a bite, since Claude's probably told himself he never should've gotten out of the car in Texas. And love for Sarah calling him "invisible boy." Why hello there, Miss Tate!

Man, though, imagine one of your relatives vanishing for nearly a decade, and then finding out they had something like that happen to them, and there was nothing you could've done to help them. Jeez, poor Sarah and poor Claude.

visiblemarket November 29 2008, 04:27:23 UTC

Heh, I think Claude is at war with himself over just that, isn't he.

And love for Sarah calling him "invisible boy." Why hello there, Miss Tate!

Hah, you caught it! That's one of my favorite parts, when Miss Tate really did show up in my mind. Although I'll admit she turned out a whole lot more motherly than I ever intended.

Yeah, that's the kind of thing it's really hard to bring someone you love back from. Even with how happy you'd be to have them back, you couldn't ever really forget how much they'd been through.

c_quinn November 29 2008, 18:05:14 UTC

The boy looks at him, all sad brown eyes and ridiculous dark hair and crooked smile.

Oh, Peter.

Yes, I know more is going on and I should have a better reaction; but I keep thinking of him, and the chance they missed. Gah. I invest far too much of myself in these stories.

Well done, as always.

visiblemarket November 29 2008, 18:06:43 UTC

*snort* Well, you never know. They may have a chance yet. Maybe.

Plus he's going to come up again, so...look forward to that?

Thank you!

tessykins December 1 2008, 05:00:47 UTC

I love these. And we totally have fetishes for scarring up Claude, don't we?

visiblemarket December 1 2008, 05:01:53 UTC

Thank you! :D It's not our fault that...he's so attractive like that...*laughs* Maybe it is our fault. But oh well.

tessykins December 2 2008, 22:15:38 UTC

I know! You should see what I'm planning to do to him in the future episode of the virtual season.

visiblemarket December 2 2008, 23:04:09 UTC

Ohh, that doesn't sound good at all. But will he be shirtless?

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cyberscribbles December 1 2008, 23:31:50 UTC

You just couldn't put this down could you? And now I've got Claude building up his own little "School for the Gifted" and coming to the rescue in season whatever.

Fave bit:

And they don’t.

She’s late for work, and he doesn’t speak to any of them for two days, but frankly, she’s surprised he ever managed to in the first place.

visiblemarket December 2 2008, 00:40:02 UTC

I really couldn't. It's been a while (actually, I think it's been forever) since I've written anything that isn't Peter/Claude focused, but I...I kind of like this a lot. And the Claude Rains School for the Special (or "special", as the case may be) is the spinoff that in my mind would make me the happiest person in the world.

I liked that bit too ;) Actually, that whole part is just about my favorite, of what I've written.

cyberscribbles December 2 2008, 00:42:25 UTC

Ah! You see even in my head my dreams it extended only to a fanfic version or Claude in charge of the X-Men School in my head. Now you've gone and mentioned spin-offs anad I'm going to have to hate you forever...

visiblemarket December 2 2008, 01:04:12 UTC

Hee, sorry. But I'm so sick of...certain people...on Heroes, proper, that I keep picturing my ideal, favoritest spin-off. Heroes: UK, with better writing, filmed on location, with Catherine Tate, Christopher Eccleston, younger actors to be determined, and Torchwood-esque shenanigans, possibly with occasional crossovers of characters I actually like.

Claude Rain's School for the "Special": Like Hogwarts, Only With More People Getting the Annoying Beat Out of Them with Staffs.

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