Reasons Unknown, Part 3

Aug 19, 2008 17:09

Title: Reasons Unknown, Part 3
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Plaude
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: Not mine. At all.
A/N: No smut in this, but there is kissing. And the next part? Will be Claude POV. So...yay.

Part 1, Part 2

Anyway... )

peter, claude, reasons unknown, fic:heroes, plaude

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lotus0kid August 19 2008, 22:03:37 UTC
Aww, this is adorable. Peter trying (not) to boss Claude into letting him take him to dinner, Claude not being able to keep from smiling and laughing even though he's probably pretty freaked out about Peter seeing him, and, of course, making out in a hotel corridor ;).

“I brought myself up here, okay?” he frowned, and didn’t move. “I’m eighteen, I can make my own decisions.“
Riiiight. Keep telling yourself that, Pete, all your life.

“Help me up.”
Claude gave him a dubious look and Peter rolled his eyes.
“I’m not going to do anything…”
Hee, there's something insanely adorable and hilarious about the idea that Peter's.. endangering Claude's virtue or something.

And the next part? Will be Claude POV. So...yay.
Yes, yay. Very much, yay. :D

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visiblemarket August 19 2008, 22:21:50 UTC
Peter trying (not) to boss Claude into letting him take him to dinner, Claude not being able to keep from smiling and laughing even though he's probably pretty freaked out about Peter seeing him, and, of course, making out in a hotel corridor

Oh, those two. They really should just get married already;) Peter's just such a brat without realizing it, and Claude's just totally mystified by him.

Riiiight. Keep telling yourself that, Pete, all your life.

Yeah...not so much, huh?

Hee, there's something insanely adorable and hilarious about the idea that Peter's.. endangering Claude's virtue or something.

Well, just imagine; Peter's all horizontal and willing and nubile. Someone's virtue is at stake, that's for sure.

Yes, yay. Very much, yay. :D

I know, right? So many questions to answer....

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lotus0kid August 19 2008, 22:31:50 UTC
Peter's just such a brat without realizing it, and Claude's just totally mystified by him.
It's a match made in heaven.

not so much, huh?
It's almost sad. Poor kid probably couldn't wait to get out on his own, and what happens when he does? He develops crazy powers he can't control and nearly destroys all of NYC.

Someone's virtue is at stake, that's for sure.
I suppose so, but it's still precious, in a way. Poor bewildered Claude.

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visiblemarket August 19 2008, 22:42:52 UTC
It's a match made in heaven.

Or in smutty fanfic, which...I say is about the same.

Poor kid probably couldn't wait to get out on his own, and what happens when he does? He develops crazy powers he can't control and nearly destroys all of NYC.

Which only seems to prove what everyone else says about him: that he can't take care of himself and can't be on his own. It's very sad.

I suppose so, but it's still precious, in a way. Poor bewildered Claude.

The poor dear has to deal with soo much. At least Peter didn't show up at his door wrapped in saran wrap.

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trippypeas August 20 2008, 01:43:30 UTC
YAAAYYY!! I WIN!

YOU WIN! WE ALL WIN!! Let's hug!!

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visiblemarket August 20 2008, 03:45:54 UTC
*hugs*!

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kiltfriction August 20 2008, 11:46:18 UTC
Oooh I love that meeting, you've done a great job of managing to write it so you can see exactly what's going on with each of them. I like the idea of Claude walking around invisibly pre-betrayal as well, just for fun or because he was concentrating or for just any reason really that wasn't necessary.

“Because I like you,” he said before he had a chance to think about it.

Claude still wasn’t looking at him, but Peter saw him wince.

“You don’t know me, friend.” .

Ooh, self-dislike Claude. Love that last line, warning and pushing away but trying to keep a hold of him at the same time. Very Claude.

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visiblemarket August 20 2008, 14:42:38 UTC
I love that meeting, you've done a great job of managing to write it so you can see exactly what's going on with each of them.

I'm so glad; I wavered on a lot of stuff, because there's so much that Peter has no idea about, but that Claude would be thinking about, and I wanted to be sure everyone at least got glimpses of that, even it is through Peter. Who is not the most reliable of observers, but there was are.

I like the idea of Claude walking around invisibly pre-betrayal as well, just for fun or because he was concentrating or for just any reason really that wasn't necessary.

I like to think it's a reflex. Or maybe he's just avoiding his messages at the front desk ;)

Ooh, self-dislike Claude.

There's always a bit of it, with Claude. Especially as he's very, very close to being disillusioned Company Man Claude.

Love that last line, warning and pushing away but trying to keep a hold of him at the same time.

He's really just completely mystified by Peter. But he sure is pretty...

Thanks for reading!

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indyhat September 12 2008, 10:59:33 UTC
Much love for Claude's perpetual kleptomania, even if here it only extends to fries ;)

Damn you and your need to make everything fragile :P

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visiblemarket September 12 2008, 13:27:12 UTC
Much love for Claude's perpetual kleptomania, even if here it only extends to fries ;)

And young men's hearts, of course...

Damn you and your need to make everything fragile :P

I am a wretched, wretched woman ;)

Thank you!

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