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visiblemarket

The Calm Before the Storm (Heroes Bride Deleted Scene)

Mar 03, 2008 23:20

Ah, so: apparently, when I try to write fluffy smut, all I get is fluff. Or angsty smut. This is, unfortunately, just fluff. Which means that yes, c_quinn, I still owe you the fluffy smut but...in the meantime, this is...something.

Title: The Calm Before the Storm
Characters/Pairings: Claude/Peter
Summary: An early moment from the Claude/Peter ( Read more... )

peter, claude, fic:heroes, fic, heroes bride, plaude

Comments 37

c_quinn March 4 2008, 05:12:08 UTC

This is lovely, thank you. Made me grin like the fool (Ah, so that's why you call me Peter) I am.

flowers that the boy found inherently fascinating just for being wild.

Loved that little image.

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 05:16:34 UTC

This is lovely, thank you. Made me grin like the fool (Ah, so that's why you call me Peter) I am.

Thank you! Does that get me off the hook for smut?

Loved that little image.

I love the idea of Peter being such a city boy; I think I've used it somewhere in, like, everything about him I've ever written.

c_quinn March 4 2008, 05:30:49 UTC

Does that get me off the hook for smut?

After what I went through for Wimon? No.

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 05:32:34 UTC

*sigh* Yeah, I kinda figured.

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trippypeas March 4 2008, 05:20:30 UTC

I'm going to assume since this isn't the smut you promise C Quinn..this was written for me. ;)

*snorts* This was lovely...

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 05:22:07 UTC

Yes. Yes it was. Definitely.

Thank you! Even though it was smut-free?

trippypeas March 4 2008, 05:26:32 UTC

You're cute..Even if you are a liar...

I can be please with fluff..I don't always need smut..I am not a horn dog...

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 05:28:55 UTC

*blushes* Sorry....

I am, but...that doesn't even help me! I still can't write smut when I want to!

But I'm glad you appreciate the fluff.

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run_itskelly March 4 2008, 07:40:03 UTC

Peter’s expression softened, eyes glanced concerned at the traces of blood, as his hands curled childishly against Claude’s shirt, “You don’t get to just…kiss me and-”

“I love you too,” he sighed, before darting in for another swift kiss against lips gone slack with shock, before he pulled away. “You idiot.”

*is promptly smothered to death by the cute*

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 13:10:17 UTC

*is promptly smothered to death by the cute*

Oh, dear: my killing streak continues.

Thanks for reading!

lotus0kid March 4 2008, 13:16:42 UTC

Lovely little interlude!

A remedy, perhaps, to Peter’s consistently rosy view of the world, one that had rather distressingly stopped bothering him as much, of late.
Oh, Claude! *tear*

visiblemarket March 4 2008, 13:19:51 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh, Claude! *tear*

He's a big softy, really.

baehj2915 March 5 2008, 03:07:25 UTC

i have an unabashed love for this series. i like very few things with peter in and you've done a good job at not making me hate him, which is a better compliment than it sounds. :D

and you did a good job with the Claude voice, so brava for getting back on the horse, or in this case, bitter, bearded man.

also, yay for deleted scenes!

JLB

visiblemarket March 5 2008, 03:11:50 UTC

Hey, no, that's an awesome compliment. (How vain is it for me to like my own Peter better than show!Peter?....probably really vain).

...I'm going to be classy, and not make a remark about how much I'd want to get back on the bitter, bearded man. Because...I'm classy like that.

Thanks for reading!