Le Tourbillon de la Vie (6/12)

[visiblemarket]

Title: Le Tourbillon de la Vie
Characters: Claude, Sandra, an occasional OC or two
Pairings: Vague and one-sided Claude/Sandra
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Language
Word Count: 872
Spoilers: In this part not terribly much but for the story overall it really helps to have read the Golden Handshake series of the GN, as well as Our Lady of Blessed

Comments

[c_quinn]

So I have been terribly, terribly behind on this. My apologies. But I did just read all of the parts I've missed and am now commenting. Yay? Maybe? A little?

I'm enjoying this story very much. You've managed to keep it tightly paced while still giving characterization. You don't spare dialouge for the action. I appreciate that. And your Sandra is fantastic.

I'll try to stop falling so behind. [laugh]

[visiblemarket]

I forgive you ;)

Aww, thank you! I still feel it's all a little talky, but I'll admit that's something I rather like so...it's hard for me to feel that bad about it. *laughs*

Don't worry about it, I appreciate comments whenever they come.

[lotus0kid]

Yikes! What now, Claude? Well, at least he'll probably get some answers.

And I'm being lazy right now and not reading the comics. Well, I read the first part of Our Lady of Blessed Acceleration. So I know a bit about Samir.

This inhibitor business is interesting. Clearly it does work, or Hassan would've escaped. Hm, the mystery deepens...

[visiblemarket]

He probably will, yes. He's crafty like that.

It's all right; the second one doesn't really add much to it. But they do make me feel sad now, about Daphne.

Thanks!