a fic to express my thoughts

[virginia_bell]

Title: give in and relish every minute of it
Author: V.M. Bell
Summary: We are blind in the water, but then we open our eyes and find the world as something different.
Rating: G
Word Count: 618
Author's Note: It rained today. I took a walk in the rain and it moved me to write. The section headings are from Imogen Heap songs I was listening to as

Comments

[expositionary]

Did anyone ever tell you that you're excellent with imagery? ♥ It's actually been rainy and sunny, alternately, all day long here -- so this piece is strangely fitting. I love section two especially: the lines about the umbrella seem like they should read like something silly, but honestly, they're not -- they're something transcendent.

Just a random note -- there seems to be an extra > tag kicking around at the end of the title in section two. ;)

[virginia_bell]

omg STUPID CODING.

*g* Thanks for reading! :)

[expositionary]

Of course. :) I actually prefer reading original fiction to fanfiction -- fic hits a certain spot for me, but original fiction will always be my One True Love. ♥ And now it's late & I'm not making any sense whatsoever.

[safebox]

Wow, this is gorgeous! Words to just immerse yourself in. Wonderful, wonderful imagery and fascinating ideas here &hearts