fic-dbsk-In Between

[virdant]

Title: In Between
Author: virdant
Length: 598 words; super-short
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Pairing: JaeHo-ish-maybe-kinda
Summary: The space between Jaejoong and Hero
Warning: Death-ish-maybe-kinda.
Notes: A bit more of an exploratory fic. Just thinking about concepts. Probably will expand this one day, but at the rate I'm writing, that's not going to

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[graveyardgrin]

Yunho looks at him, eyes slanted, a smile on his lips, care in his voice, and Jaejoong forgets suddenly that this is all planned, that in the next few minutes, Yunho will be nothing but his friend again, and falls in love.

But Jaejoong does not hear the rest. Instead, he hears love love love for the rest of his life, trapped behind the lenses of Hero.

;_________; ♥♥♥

[virdant]

Thank you for reading. ^^

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

I'm glad you liked! It makes for an interesting concept, and I wish I can expand it one day, but for now, it'll have to simply be like this; which is good, I suppose, but it could be better and one day I'll learn how to write well enough for it. ^^;;

[riiche]

Yunho looks at him, eyes slanted, a smile on his lips, care in his voice, and Jaejoong forgets suddenly that this is all planned, that in the next few minutes, Yunho will be nothing but his friend again, and falls in love.

shjkflak this sentence is gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous and I wish for you to write more just based on this sentence because oh, my heart. ;_;

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

Ah, thank you. ^^;; I might, one day. I hope I do, I really like most of the ideas in this fic, and if I was more patient, I would have tried to expand more of them. Thank you v. much though. ^^

[garfield_lit_up]

ugh
wonderful...
The last two lines.

"Jaejoong is happy. Jaejoong is content. Jaejoong knows nothing.

Jaejoong is dead."

they have a sing-songy quality to it, kind of demented actually (its how i read it) and haunting also in the repetive use of Jaejoong's name to start each short sentence. The first line, all three sentences have five syllables so there's a uniform rhythm and the last line only has four syllables instead of five , like its cut off like that BAM, Jaejoong is dead...
ahh love for this fic...
love...
I'm definitely a fangirl fo your now...heheh
^_^
Jaeho fighting!!!

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

The story is meantto be a bit haunting, and I'm glad you feel that the voice enforces that. :)