fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 9
Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 9
Author: virdant
Length: 2,222 words; multi-part (9/9) End.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, HoMin, MinSu, implied HyukSu
Summary: But now, he works, four rooms away from Kim Jaejoong, carefully dissecting implants, trying to find the reason for this epidemic ( Read more... )
Author: virdant
Length: 2,222 words; multi-part (9/9) End.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, HoMin, MinSu, implied HyukSu
Summary: But now, he works, four rooms away from Kim Jaejoong, carefully dissecting implants, trying to find the reason for this epidemic ( Read more... )
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ugh, it's like....ugh idek. there's no...closure. D: it's like everyone's had to settle for what they can instead of what they want.
especially changmin omggggggg poor baby WHY ARE YOU SO STUBBORN AND BLIND ASLDFJSDLFJASWPJADSLSDLDSJLKEWJKLDLKFLKFL.
you know, it was so DDDDDDDDDDD: to read so much homin crammed in the end. it made it harder. damn you know how to get to me. *__________________*
the soulmates make it a little better. but only a little.
such a long journey. :') congrats on finishing.
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Mm. Well. That's kinda what I wanted to write. The only people that are happy are the people you can't see, and so everything's a gaping emptiness. it's a dystopia after all.
Changmin hurt. He didn't want to suffer, and I didn't want him to suffer, but he's stubborn enough and cares enough to do what he--misguided as he may be--believes is right. And he makes so many mistakes trying to do the right thing. Except he's just too trusting of humankind. Despite his intelligence, he just keeps hoping that people are good. And so he loses.
^^;; I like the Homin. They make me smile. (There's MinSu? A little? Except Su gave up in around chapter 2, so there's only Yunho left to try. And Jaejoong doesn't even know Changmin, otherwise there'd be JaeMin.) :( Sorry.
Soulmates make everything better. :)
^^ It relieves me. Now I can study for midterms without worrying about this! (and do NaNo, kehehe). Thank you. ^^
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i think that this is the most twisted and confusing (at first) story i have ever read but suddenly,it all made sense in the end. i'm amazed at how you carefully crafted the story. you handled it really well.♥♥♥♥♥ even the ninja!suju had me grinning.
“Yoochun's my soulmate,” Jaejoong snaps.
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!
i--the-- you're just awesome, okay? nothing more to say. and this entire fic rightfully deserves to be memmed.^^
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Ah. ^^;; Thank you for saying so. I'm not that good though.
Well, I'm glad that it all made sense in the end! I was worried it wouldn't make any sense to anybody except for me, but I'm glad it made sense to you. ^^ Thank you; I'm glad you found it nice. (I like using suju for extra characters. 's a bad habit, but it's better than adding Cpop boybands into the mix, which is just iffy.
^^ I like that sentence. JaeChun is adorable.
^^;; thank you. :) I'm happy you liked it.
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Thank you for this fic! I enjoyed reading this!
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That seems to be the consensus so far, though I didn't want a happy ending because this is a dystopia, and happy endings don't fit in dystopias.
Changmin is probably the most innocent in this, because he's consistently manipulated. Everything he does is a result of manipulation.
Thank you for reading; I'm glad you liked it. ^^
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Min.. *sniff sniff*
This was actually beautifully sad and heartbreaking.. Very well written, I think your story was something truly unique.. But my Min! AH! *bawls* I think need a hug..
I really appriciate your sharing this! Thank you SO much. Hehe..
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LOVE!
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I'm glad you find it unique; I try to write different stuff. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. ^^
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I'm glad you liked it.
I don't think I'll be writing any more long fics anytime soon, however, since I'll be working on one-shots if I'm even writing.
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