Comments | virdant: fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 7

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fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 7

Oct 10, 2008 14:14

Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 7
Author: virdant
Length: 1,329 words; multi-part (7/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, HoSu, (HoMin)
Summary: “What makes a person real?” Yunho asks, staring ahead. He didn’t want to do this, Junsu remembers. He shook his head and protested that he was done with the counsel, but Jaejoong ( Read more... )

pairing: dbsk hosu, pairing: dbsk jaechun, organizational: fic, genre: tragedy, genre: angst, fandom: dbsk, genre: au, multi-part: hand in hand, pairing: dbsk homin

Comments 19

morninglory17 October 10 2008, 22:44:52 UTC

OMG!! Really>>>? Seriously>>> Yunho is crazy???!!!! Oh that really hurts---I can't believe Yunho did that to him. OH my gosh.

Please find Shim Changmin. He's compassionate..I want him to fix things.

virdant October 11 2008, 00:57:36 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

Well, Yunho's made decisions because he believes them best. Things will be explained more in the next chapter, where Yunho gets to narrate, again. But suffice to say, none of them can be trusted when the narrate. :)

Changmin will turn up next chapter. ^^ Thank you for reading, I hope you'll keep reading.

yuxo October 10 2008, 23:04:27 UTC

good god yunho wtfhhhh DDDDDDDDD: and yet i still pity him. :X

It’s awkward, walking straight without turns for so long. Awkward existing outside the four grey walls that made up his life for so many years.

YOU DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND HOW AMAZING THESE TWO SENTENCES ARE. *___________* just imagining him walking along like that...GUHHH!!!!

NEXT CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. ♥

virdant October 11 2008, 01:02:17 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

Yunho is the poor person trapped by the city counsel, and nothing he does really can help him.

♥ thank you! I like those two sentences. Junsu's a fun narrator.

Update soon, promise! (though if I'm stupid, it might be delayed again. D:)

firehead41 October 11 2008, 00:59:02 UTC

Thank you for this update despite the fact Yunho betrayed them~~~~

virdant October 11 2008, 01:02:52 UTC

Thank you for reading. ^^ Yunho's a very complex character, and Junsu doesn't really see that. Things will be much more clear next chapter. :) I hope you keep reading. :)

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virdant October 11 2008, 04:20:22 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

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yup! update! ^^ virdant October 11 2008, 04:23:08 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^
Lol, well, it makes me a bit sad too, but 9 ties up the story fast enough and I don't want to trail complexities anyways. A bit stressful.

Yunho is misunderstood, really. Junsu is a horrendous narrator. And that's all I'm going to say because next chapter is Yunho's and everything about Yunho gets explained.

Changmin really needed to show up more in this story, so he'll be getting his time. Yoochun as well. :)

D: Yeah. Well, this version probably is better, but it still makes me sad. I had to re-write ~2/3 of the entire chapter, and I didn't have an outline, so it was just depressing and tiring and not much fun at all. But I fixes it.
Red balloons are awesome. I took a picture with a friend's camera, just to commemorate. XD

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virdant October 11 2008, 05:09:13 UTC

Yup. Yunho doesn't get much story time, but he does have his own story to tell. :) And Changmin's been... gone for the majority of the story D:

yeah. 'twas depressing and I ended up kicking rocks in the canyon, but 's okay now, which is good. Still a bit upsetting, but all is good. :)