Comments | vipjuly: Up & Down

vipjuly

Up & Down

Apr 27, 2011 12:32

Title: Up & Down
Pairing: Minho/Key (Gwiboon)
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Length: 6/9
Summary: Gwiboon is having a horrible day. It’s snowing (she hates snow), it’s cold (she hates the cold), and she forgot her scraper for her frozen block of ice that is posing as a car. When a handsome stranger saves her sanity (and her designer boots), she starts to ( Read more... )

series: up and down, #girl!shinee, pairing: minho/gwiboon

Comments 62

g_odalisque13 April 27 2011, 19:48:52 UTC

dude really?
i have two papers due tomorrow and i have to make a print of a photograph for my 4 hour long class tonight.
where the fuck are you hiding??? *looks around*
i want to read this so badly but i will control myself. perhaps i will be able to take a break after my class and read this.
so this is my SPOT. haha
i will be back, i promise!!! <3

vipjuly April 27 2011, 19:50:51 UTC

^_________^
i seriously don't know ahaha but your bitch face gwiboon icon works pretty well xD
don't worry, study hard!!!

g_odalisque13 April 28 2011, 03:46:45 UTC

oh my god jillian!
so many things happening!
i mean, the beginning was all so sweet! (and hot fdjgnkj)
and then the end :'( minho! how can you do this???

okay, but i need to take a moment to appreciate the smut, so here goes.

“Fuck,” he swore, moving down so that his nose brushed against the damp spot in the cotton, and she felt the heat being sucked away from her body with the deep inhale that he took.
little details like this. jsghkejnj

Her whole body trembled with the arousal that surged through her and she felt his fingers moving her panties aside, obviously too impatient to pull them down her legs.
i approve of this!

Her toes curled into the cool sheets and she felt the pleasure spike up into her lower belly, her lack of romance over the past years building up in one fell swoop as she climaxed without even being penetrated, her juices creating a soft spraying sound as they exited her body.
squirting!gwiboon is still, and always will be, ♥

Their lips met again and he pushed his hips into her hand, seemingly content with ( ... )

teenageisland April 27 2011, 19:48:57 UTC

lalala spot

teenageisland April 27 2011, 20:34:19 UTC

okay so obviously

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vipjuly April 28 2011, 00:30:20 UTC

that minho gif is forever relevant to my life ^___^
and ke ke ke we'll see what he does in the next chapter?
WHY DO YOU THINK THIS SERIES IS CALLED ~UP AND DOWN~

teenageisland April 28 2011, 00:40:12 UTC

slkfhlskhflkshlkfhdfhkdfld
why didn't i notice that=________=

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panic18 April 27 2011, 20:04:53 UTC

WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT
IT WAS GOING SO WELL (my first mingirl!key smut omg) AND THEN THE ENDING. WHATTTTTTT WHY OMG

vipjuly April 28 2011, 00:30:45 UTC

well you see the title plays so well with how the chapters have been playing out ^^;;;;;
kekeke wait and see what happens~~~
thank you for reading ^^

I AM NOT STALKING THIS OKAY. <3 fadedandinsane April 27 2011, 20:05:11 UTC

first there was that... and then they did that... and then he signed it... and then... what?

whyyyy?

i think my incoherency speaks for itself?

Re: I AM NOT STALKING THIS OKAY. <3 vipjuly April 28 2011, 00:31:09 UTC

lmfao well the story title sort of speaks for itself right?
thanks for reading and enjoying darling ♥

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vipjuly April 28 2011, 00:31:38 UTC

lol don't worry!!! the title may be 'up & down' but i assure you this story will end on an 'up' note!! ^^
thank you for reading~~