novel: "Touch" chapter 9

Jul 11, 2013 23:15

Well, that turned out longer than I expected.

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2,300 words behind the cut... )

novel, "touch"

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vettecat July 12 2013, 03:57:36 UTC
"her hand already turning the doorknob as she said it, her feet barely waiting for the door to open before she entered the stuffy hallway and strode toward the waiting area." -- seems to me it's a little soon for her to be that comfortable walking around on her own?

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