Comments | vio55: Betrayal and Loyalty (64damn_prompts - Prompt #44: turpentine kisses and mistaken blows)

vio55

Betrayal and Loyalty (64damn_prompts - Prompt #44: turpentine kisses and mistaken blows)

Aug 07, 2009 22:22

Title: Betrayal and Loyalty ( Read more... )

comm: 64damn_prompts, fandom: death note

Comments 4

sylladex August 8 2009, 16:26:47 UTC

Oh Misa... You poor thing. Lovely fic. Made me a good kind of sad. :)

vio55 August 8 2009, 17:31:58 UTC

i agree~ poor misa. :(

glad you liked it!

azalee_calypso August 10 2009, 11:27:27 UTC

I was actually thinking of the Takada thing, but this works possibly even better :DD I adore how you made Misa aware of what's going on yet still completely devoted to Light and still not understanding it all - not stupid and still in character. Kudos, really.
It's all kind of heartbreaking. The last line is so like her ♥
Thanks a lot ! :D

vio55 August 10 2009, 13:33:57 UTC

Oh my. Takada didn't even cross my mind. Sorry. XD

And I'm glad you thought she was in character. I don't know why, but I found her kind of hard to write without making her look completely stupid. Heh.

Glad you liked it. :3