Tainted Love (Epilogue)

Jun 04, 2012 23:19


Epilogue

Rubbing his eyes as the last vestiges of sleep dissipated the following morning, Reid felt the warmth of the body that was still wrapped around his own. This was the first time in his life that he’d ever awakened in someone’s arms and, like all of the other firsts he’d experienced with Luke, he quickly decided that he never wanted to live ( Read more... )

!author|artist: vintagelamb, fan fiction, atwt, rating: nc-17, luke/reid

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marsabi June 5 2012, 21:31:11 UTC
Nice job, with or without the epilogue here, I enjoyed the story

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vintagelamb June 5 2012, 21:59:06 UTC
Thank you.

I have to admit that the bow on the epilogue may be a bit too shiny, but to write it any other way would have required a sequel, I think.

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traciamc June 5 2012, 23:29:40 UTC
Well, I already told you how much I love shiny red (or any color) bows, but wanted to tell you what I thought about this.

One word: Perfection!

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vintagelamb June 6 2012, 00:44:06 UTC
Thanks, Traci.

As the catalyst for these Big Bangs, your opinion carries a lot of weight for me. And I'm glad you liked the bow!

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smoothlikebutta June 6 2012, 02:26:08 UTC
What a beautifully written story! Once I started, I couldn't stop even though I should have been sleeping. Thank you for sharing this with us and for adding the epilogue. I am glad their happy new beginning gets to start somewhere in the middle.

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vintagelamb June 7 2012, 00:19:55 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. But, I am sorry if you missed out on needed sleep!

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sleeper6 June 6 2012, 02:37:14 UTC
I'm so, so glad to read another of your fics. You've been missed, friend!

First, the sex scene in the first part--OH WOW! Seriously, I read that twice already. It's not just for the sex itself but the way you draw it out in so much detail. It just makes it seem so real and raw and emotional. One of the best LuRe first times I've read for sure!

And I was so worried that they couldn't get past the past when they met up again but I'm glad that Luke still had that effect on Reid and Reid was powerless to resist it. They're just so meant to be!!!

And of course Luke would want to fight with Reid--that's so IC for him. Glad Reid was willing to let him.

The epilogue I did enjoy. You know I'm all about the angst too BUT I did want them to just enjoy life now that they're giving one another a second chance without dealing with too much pain and obstacles. Fantastic fic!

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vintagelamb June 7 2012, 00:26:33 UTC
You have no idea how much I sweat the sex scenes, so I'm so grateful that you liked it enough to read it twice! Gosh, it's so nice to always have you here to support what I write...this fandom is lucky to have you.

And, of course they're just so meant to be! Look at the fact that we're all still here, writing and reading about them. Stupid show had no idea what they had.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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smittle June 6 2012, 03:55:58 UTC
This is brilliant! I love this kind of angst: thoughtful and heavily character driven. I could understand exactly why each acted the way they did even as my heart broke that they were pushing each other away. Thank you for giving us the happy ending that these two deserve. I am a fan of the unambiguous happy ending so thank you and thank jacob for the sweet, reassuring epilogue. Great job!

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vintagelamb June 7 2012, 00:28:30 UTC
I couldn't be happier that this worked for you and that the angst met your expectations. I always worry that it will come off as too plot-driven, rather than about the characters.

And, yes, I can always count on jacob to have her finger on the pulse of what the fandom needs.

Thank you for your kind words.

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