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[vintage__cherry]

Title: Virgin Territory
Author: vintage__cherry
Pairing/Characters: Jack/James Sparrington!
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Genre: Humour
Summary: The one thing Jack was a virgin to..not sex!
Disclaimer: Not mine...trust me I 've checked.

Comments

[xdragonsbreathx]

SQUEEE!!! That's an odd take on Jack. A virgin? *dies* Usually it's the other way around. Thanks, mate!!!

[xdragonsbreathx]

That's what I meant. Jack is, by no means, a virgin. He just....hasn't.....done James yet. It's hard to even imagine Jack being a virgin. 'Specially after the Scarlett and Giselle scene in CotBP.

[kayliemalinza]

Yeah, it is a cool concept. Especially since Jack isn't a virgin of sex, he a virgin to seeing a Commodore naked. And of course he wants to remedy that. ;P

This drabble would be a lot better with a grammar check. Because I have lots of free time, and hey! it's only 100 words! I corrected it below. I think one or two changes are for rhythm rather than grammar, so feel free to tell me to stuff it.

Captain Jack Sparrow, scourge of the royal navy, luckiest pirate ever seen, was amazed. Completely bamboozled.

After all his years at sea, all he’d done, all he’d drunk, there was actually something in this world Jack was a virgin to. He downed his liquid ambrosia and swaggered off to his beloved Pearl.

“Well, Sparrow,” Commodore Norrington asked his bedroom intruder. “What do you want? I assure you I have no rum in my possession.”

Jack stepped forward and graced James with his best leer, enveloping James’ barely clothed form with his sinfully dark eyes.

“I’ve never seen a commodore naked.”I'm pretty sure that kept the 100-word count

[vintage__cherry]

good point...cheers I'll change it

[kayliemalinza]

Glad I could help!