"Atrophy," McCoy/Chekov, STXI, ADULT

Jul 07, 2010 21:31

Title: Atrophy
Author: vinniebatman
Fandom: Star Trek, specifically STXI, aka the Reboot.
Characters/Pairings: McCoy/Chekov
Rating/Warnings:  Adult for sexy times and McCoy's invective-laden inner monologuing.
Spoilers: General spoilers for the newest Star Trek film.
Prompt:  McCoy/Chekov, "You don't have to go home, but you can't stay here." for strickens_girl
Word Count: ( Read more... )

mccoy/chekov, prompt call, fanfic, stxi, my writing

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strickens_girl July 8 2010, 04:50:47 UTC
*wibbles*

I love this. This seems so like McCoy to me, wanting but hating himself for it. The last line is my fav. Lovely.

*cuddles you*

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 16:21:08 UTC
Eeee! *flails, tackles*

I'm so glad you liked it! I was a bit nervous about this, so I'm so dead pleased you enjoyed it.

Their romance will be a slow one, with Chekov plotting, slowly making himself a constant presence in McCoy's life.

~Alice~

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witchway July 8 2010, 18:58:55 UTC
FIRST: all these startreck icons are to DIE for!

SECOND: OMG with the H O T.

THIRD: yeah, guilt needs WATER to wash it away, and that's all.

FOURTH: OMG McCoy you're a DOCTOR for goddsakes, just admit you're gay and get on with your life! Yes, you quite obviously need to stop using Chekov (no matter how much you enjoy it) and start enjoying him. *yay hugs two men who will eventually love each other*

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 20:10:10 UTC
Actually, the gay aspect doesn't bother him. If Chekov was a woman, he'd still hate himself. McCoy just doesn't like himself, so he feels like even if he had something left to give Chekov, even if he could love him, Chekov would deserve better. McCoy feels like he's poisoned, unable to offer anything of worth.

Chekov kinda knew already, but he has no plans to let McCoy push him away. Chekov is a sneaky, determined bastid.

Thanks for the commenty joy!

~Alice~

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serialbathera July 8 2010, 05:12:55 UTC
Great job :)

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 16:21:50 UTC
Thank you sweetie! Thanks so much!

~Alice~

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serialbathera July 8 2010, 17:41:57 UTC
You are welcome ::glomps you randomly::

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treksnoopy July 8 2010, 05:50:57 UTC
Got to love a good guilt fic & Leonard is so susceptible:-)
Very nicely done!

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 16:26:04 UTC
He is, I think he's lost so much that he's really internalized it. I'm so glad you liked it, and I really that you took the time to let me know.

~Alice~

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easilymused1956 July 8 2010, 05:51:20 UTC
Ah, Chekov, there's no doubt McCoy is his addiction. Now McCoy has to realize it's a mutual one.

Wonderfully moody story.

Renee

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 16:27:52 UTC
McCoy is Chekov's addition; he always expected the treatment he's received, but now that he's seen that McCoy can be a bit tender, well, McCoy doesn't stand a damn chances. *points to own icon*

Thank you for commenting!

~Alice~

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easilymused1956 July 8 2010, 17:03:09 UTC
Love your icon!

Renee

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diane_kepler July 8 2010, 06:19:43 UTC
Unf and wow and love it.

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vinniebatman July 8 2010, 16:30:02 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! It was nerve wracking yet easy to write; I was nervous about it, so its quite nice to get such positive feedback.

Thanks.

~Alice~

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