[Fanfiction] - Title: What I Deserve (I’ll Be There…)

[villa_visualkei]

Title: What I Deserve (I’ll Be There…)
Pairing: OnKey / Key x OC
Rating: PG-15/R? (Just to warn you there is some rough violence/language and stuff… so I dunno some people might not be comfortable with that…)
Genre: AU, Angst, Drama (some Romance/fluff-ish)
Words: 3,466
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I own is the

Comments

[7myunghee]

this make me cried...*grab the tissue*
who is the jerk that dare to hurt kibummie???
I hate him...

Jinki just too sweet...Love it...

[villa_visualkei]

Awwww. Sorry! -Hands more tissues- I didn't mean to make you cry, (=^____^=).
Ahhhhhh... well~ Like it says in the pairing it was an OC but to be honest I kept seeing Jonghyun... bahahahahaa -runs- XD~ But I couldn't even make Jonghyun that mean, he has been a ‘villain’ in all of my latest projects. I don't know why I keep wanting to write him as if he is the biggest jerk in the World. Hahahaha. But yeah, we can just say that he is some jerk that is entirely made up. XD~
Of course Jinki is a darling~ <3.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[ahem_bpoutarawr]

at first i thought onkey played master-slave and i was like 0.o whoa, onkey fics had reached this level? that's great. LMAO. my pervert mind, can't you be more obvious /ashamed. I dunno how i got that twisted idea D: but then, oh noes! this is more serious than that! this was sad ;_; poor Kibum, who's that man? *prepares knife* how dare him hurting Kibummie... ah, Jinki as a knight in shining armor :9 and the kiss.. <3
And oh my god! evil spam robot challenge or whatever it is called!!! admtwjgpta wmadgptaj wmjad!!!! sorry, i hate it w/ passion, jsyk XDD

[villa_visualkei]

BAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG! No way, that is great! I couldn't write that. I would never be able to look at Jinki in the same way!!!! Kekekeke~
I feel kinda bad for making Kibum hurt… but at least Jinki was there to save the day right? (^o^).
Well like I said in my previous comment, I just kept picturing Jonghyun throughout the whole thing, but I couldn't make him THAT mean, because it seems like everything I have been working on lately has Jonghyun as the bad guy... so you know, I thought I'd give him a break. Ha!
Evil spam robot challenge... (o.o) eh? LOL.

Thanks for reading and commenting, sorry you couldn't access it at first (>.<).

[ahem_bpoutarawr]

nah, it's fine. you unlocked it anyway. aww, i hope someone out there would try writing onkey ~hardcore~ it's a good thing to step out of our comfort zone, regardless the outcome but that's hard :( And onkey suited best in fluffy fluffy fics 8)
and yes, spam robot challenge. i get 'incorrect response to spam robot challenge' A. LOT. Like... i dunno, i thought i get it rite but turned out the it's wrong *sighs* so i kinda love to complained bout it to made me feel less dumb XD or maybe that made me dumber 0.o but that words are hard to type in phone. the fonts' small and twisted ide D:

[villa_visualkei]

Ha, yeah it was so annoying it just wouldn't let me change it to Public! Grrrrr. (^_____^).
Yeah, I am sure some people have, I just couldn't write that sort of thing... I struggle with writing intense kissing scenes without feeling embarrassed. Hahaahaha. OnKey does suit fluffy lovey fics though, that is true.
Ahhhh, okay. I am still not sure.... but I think I see. HAHAHAHAHA!
Thanks for your comments.

[keyzy_kyumsy]

you know..for frist...i though that main is jinki!! (i even crush him...=.=)...
but,,awww jinki is the savior ...awwwww..
why kibum got harm like that?....T^T *sobs*

[villa_visualkei]

Yeah, I guessed I fooled people, and I didn't even intend for that. It was only when I read it back that I thought; "OMG! People are so going to think he is Jinki... (O.O)" but then I guess it's just even more relieving that in the end it turns out not to be.
Well to be honest I don't really know myself, I just fancied trying to write some angst and Kibum always seems great for angst... and this really has no fall proof plot... kekekeke~ XD.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

[melalocket]

T_______________T
i really love this hiikksss~
onkey T_______________T
beautiful T_______________T

[villa_visualkei]

Thank you!
I am glad you liked it!
OnKey is LOVE! (^___^).

Thank you for reading and commenting.