[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 4/5]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 4/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 9,376 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I

Comments

[villa_visualkei]

Hehe, it certainly is happening.

I love jealous Kibum, especially because here I think it takes a lot of him to actually admit to feeling that way. It shows that Jinki's changing him, kyaah :3.

OMG! I was so embarrassed and worried about that scene, it took me a while to write it, I kept going back and editing it. Waaah. It was kinda intense, loool, for me anyway, (=^_^=).

Aha, exactly, :3.

Glad you enjoyed this part and I hope you like the last part as well.

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment.

[hitoshisakurai]

MY FEELINGS

[villa_visualkei]

OMG - OnKey GIF perfect-ness. I shall dwell in it for a moment

[eternalonkey]

OH MY GOD.
IM SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT ;__;
but Honestly.. Im so falling in love with your words.... so romantic and beautiful (╥﹏╥)
its so slow and I dunno but I love it until I can feel what they feel...

and tck.. minho... you... can I punch his face? #sigh

but so glad because kibum still virgin \(//∇//)\ I like when jinki is first for kibum.. that's so sweet >\\\<

ahhh I need chapter 5.. but is it really will end? T_T but I love your fic... and lately so lacking of great onkey fanfic... writte more please :')

-sorry for lacking english ^^v-

[villa_visualkei]

No need to apologize, thank you for commenting at all, :3.

Awww, thank you so much, that's such a wonderful compliment.

Aha, I know I made Minho a big meanie... it's okay though because Kibum has Jinki so... he's got the better deal, looool XD~.

I am a romantic at heart so Jinki being Kibum's first was one of my favourite bits too~ haha.

Ah, sorry, yeah the last part is part five, which I should hopefully be posting later on. I hope you enjoy it! And I will try and make more OnKey stories for you to enjoy.
Wow, really?? Thank you so much.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

[theia88]

oh dear, this maybe the best chapter so far, seriously... why embarrassed by your own writing? the love scene is fucking awesome, so smooth there... no rush, no bold,,, but still beautiful. and i'm fucking in love with the make out scene.. can you please write more of onkey make out scene? keke~
i love jealous kibum, so much! haha this is kind of i want to read from the start lmao...
kibum's being a bitch but still managed to keep his virginity kinda reminds me of a girl in movie called 'easy A' which is so kibumish lol
oh the nerd genius geek is a good kisser and i'm surprised that he wasn't feel nervous... so many things about jinki that surprised me, never fail to impress me.. this is why i like your jinki's characterization so much in this fic. i'm being serious.
oh and minho's being a jerk lol i hope he doesn't do the same thing to taemin as he did to kibum... *sighs*
i just love this chapter alot, really... asdfghjklasdfghjkl i wanna cry... *sobs

[villa_visualkei]

Waaah, really?? (= O.O =).
Aha, I am easily embarrassed and a little (a lot actually) insecure about my writing ability. I always get waaay embarrassed when trying to write love scenes.
WOW, Seriously? Thank you ~ I'm really glad you liked it and think so highly of it. Bahahaa, errr I will try!! FIGHTING!!!! For the OnKey make-out sessions :3.

I KNOW! I love a jealous Kibum too, it makes his feisty side come out, but it also shows his interest for Jinki too~ hehe.
Oh I know that movie... I haven't watched it though but my best friend keeps pestering me too, haha.
Ne, Jinki is full of surprises, keke XDD~. Wow thank you, I like a silently confident Jinki, I think he goofs around a lot but is actually quite calm and considerate.

Hmmm, yeah Minho is a bit of a meanie, but hopefully he will learn from his mistakes and treat Taemin like a Princess Prince, (=^____^=).

Thank you!!!! I'm glad you like it, don't cry though :3.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

^_^

[chibonkey]

ffinaaally...they both confessed their feeling

Re: ^_^

[villa_visualkei]

At last they were true to themselves and each other, (=^.^=).
Yey for OnKey!!!! :3.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.