Fic: Anthropology

Oct 30, 2008 15:38


The finishathon master list is already up because of LJ going down tomorrow. This story, I tell you, was not easy to write as all I really had was the beginning and end. There are reasons stories languish on the finishathon list! Thanks to astrogirl2 for her excellent--as always--beta ( Read more... )

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kernezelda October 30 2008, 03:02:28 UTC
*clasps hands together*

Oh, lovely! I love Vila here, trying to make peace with his memories, strike safely where he can, trying to hide from himself his loneliness even as he grows fonder of the rat in the box.

And Avon, sardonic and as close to admitting friendship as he's capable, seeking Vila and Orac and giving Vila a reason to trust him a bit again.

And Orac, growing fond of Vila!

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vilakins October 30 2008, 03:14:39 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I never know if a story worked till someone reads it. :-D

I usually regard the little plastic rat as a liability, but then no one but Vila bothered to get to know him (even if it was with jokes).

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imhilien October 30 2008, 04:42:09 UTC
Thanks for that, it was a good story to read. ^_^

I like how Avon was willing to go and find an ill Vila, though Avon would have denied he cared, of course. :-p

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vilakins October 30 2008, 04:54:55 UTC
Thank you.

Of course! And Vila would deny that it matters. :-)

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lizamanynames October 30 2008, 05:50:41 UTC
Oh, that was beautiful. A beautifully painfully real rebuilding and healing of things shattered. I think this might be my favourite PGP. It also feels darker than your usual stuff - but I like that, it suits this story.

Very very very good work.

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vilakins October 30 2008, 08:19:44 UTC
Thank you! :-D I wasn't sure whether it was too dark, so yay! I do like to end with hope though.

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vjezkova October 30 2008, 10:43:51 UTC
I liked your story very much, thank you. It is always like meeting good old friends - and it is good to know that both Vila and Avon are human like you or me...:-)

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vilakins October 30 2008, 10:59:18 UTC
Thank you!

I'm not too sure about Avon, and I think he'd deny it too. :-)

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quarryquest October 30 2008, 14:47:32 UTC
That was lovely. Ultraworld was an odd episode but I loved Orac and Vila working together. Its great to see that happening again here and that Orac has made a friend.

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vilakins October 30 2008, 19:49:32 UTC
Thanks. Yes, Vila's the only one who would see Orac as enough of a person to make friends with.

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