Comments | viktoriavampyr: I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...20/?

viktoriavampyr

I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...20/?

Jun 06, 2009 18:10

“Show me.”

I’ll admit this scared me.

I wasn’t prepared, not really; it was more or less my only chance to show him. Spencer and Jon were both helping Spencer’s mother to prepare dinner, and we were up in the slowly darkening bedroom.
And I’d agreed that I would show him at some point, the reasons for my hatred of my body.

“Okay.”

He sat down on the ( Read more... )

ryden, angst, joncer

Comments 15

fantasylandx3 June 7 2009, 15:45:55 UTC

this was a really good chapter. i was right when i guessed he cut :D that made my day haha. i feel smart 8-)
well done writing this it was well written.
I LOVE THIS STORY<3

i_sell_rainbows June 9 2009, 00:24:37 UTC

This hurts so bad.. Like, you have no idea.. ):
Btw, I fucking love this story !!
Your writing's really good.. (:

vivheartsrydon June 9 2009, 00:33:48 UTC

Ahhh poor ryan :/...i didn't think he was cutting himself...ahhhh*hugs him*!!i hope this won't tear them apart....xoxo

safyre993 June 9 2009, 19:07:17 UTC

OMGRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY RYRO WHY???????????????
I feel so sorry 4 Ry for cutting himself and Bren for thinking and knowing it was his fault.
This 1 was sooo sad......
please tell me the next one is happier.......
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXD

viktoriavampyr June 10 2009, 03:51:48 UTC

it kinda didn't seem so sad writing it, I thought I mightn't have got the message across, but OBVIOUSLY SO!!!!
The next one should be....
OKAAAAAAAAAAY!!
ily
<3333333333333

fantasylandx3 June 12 2009, 20:42:05 UTC

that's the same as me, i don't feel sad if i write something horrible, but as soon as i reread it i'm like, sobbing to myself. i'm dreadful at crying at my own stuff but i never cry at anything else :) i'm so self-centered it's annoying.
sorry i was stalking your comments. i was just seeing what others said because i think you deserve niiiiiice things said about your story (:
god i'm a bit of a suckup but i don't mean to be. i genuinely like your story <3

viktoriavampyr June 13 2009, 08:03:47 UTC

yeah, except I cry ALL the time at others' work, never mine, I'm just too emotional, but that may not be a bad thing ;)
that's cool. I do that too, YAY!!! :)
no that's absolutely fine, I don't mind if you're a suckup.
ily darling <33333333333