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heliopath_army in viktorhermione

Why I Liked Krum

Dec 13, 2010 18:43

Hello. First time posting on here.

Title: Why I Liked Krum
Author: heliopath_army
Rating: PG
Characters: Hermione Weasley, Viktor Krum,
Disclaimer: Nope. Harry Potter is (unfortunately) not mine. And I'm (unfortunately) not making any money.
Wordcount: 1013
Genre: Fluffy, Romance

Summary: In which Hermione gives an explanation of why she liked her ( Read more... )

Comments 4

pelespen December 13 2010, 20:19:31 UTC

Oh, I really, really like this. I think you got her voice perfectly, which is always so refreshing in HP fandom, you know? I can totally see Hermione being that analytical about herself, and knowing herself, instead of just being squawky and brainy and bookish - heck, even in book one (or maybe just movie one), we see that she knows herself well. But this - this is just sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing. :)

heliopath_army December 13 2010, 20:26:41 UTC

Thank you for commenting :D (you just made me a very happy person)

anonymous June 11 2011, 09:12:27 UTC

Wow, this was stunning. :< I almost felt a bit sad during the whole story, there was some sort of melancholic tone in it... Though the mountain troll-part made me laugh. :D

I think you've captured Hermione perfectly. not just the third in a trio, the one-who-does-the-research --> This was so in character in my opinion. Great story and it was nice to read something that wasn't in "normal" appearance. Creative to make it look like a diary entry (or something) and I loved how you had "cut" it in pieces. :) And sorry for my english, I'm not a native.

heliopath_army June 11 2011, 11:40:18 UTC

Thank you so much :D
I thought Hermione would be quite likely to write in an essay-like format :)
Your English is great!