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[vikki]

So, I'm looking around at all the fic exchanges and big bangs and whatnot, and you know what's missing? Angel comment!fic meme. There's an angelcest kinkmeme going on, but what about the less kinky stuff?

Man, obviously I'm just bored on Friday night, orz.

The SPN Angel Comment!Fic Meme+Anything up to an R rating allowed - gen, any pairing, any

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[liliaeth]

The FBI is tracking a case of a serial killer who leaves his victim's bodies with winglike shapes burned underneath them. Then they find Castiel standing over one of those bodies. He's too hurt to 'teleport'. How do they react to him.

Re: Part 7

[vikki]

Done now! Glad you're enjoying this! =D

Part 8 (once again I have missed the point of commentfic)

[vikki]

Novak hesitates at the question, unlacing his fingers and making loose fists of his hands. He meets Miller's eyes, and Jason can almost read the question there: How does this benefit you? But he says nothing, and the phone goes silent.

"All right," Jason sighs. This tiny little precinct isn't equipped with a way to trace cell phone calls, he's sure, but it's mostly curiosity. The name 'Dean' is bringing a nagging feeling of familiarity.

Novak looks at the phone and it goes off again. Jason tilts the screen towards himself; this time it's a number, not a name. "Dean," Novak says

Final Part (9)

[vikki]

Novak uses the words, "I'm waiting for my lawyer," like an awkward battering ram for the next half an hour, hesitating every time and looking away. It's a lie but Miller can't make him crack, even if he does get a free six hours until Patterson arrives.

He only breaks this mantra once, at the same moment that Jason feels a strong craving for a cigarette: "If you don't stop smoking, you will die in six years."

"Well, you're certainly more specific than most people telling me the cancer sticks will kill me," Jason sneers.

"Six years, two months, eleven days," Novak says. "Nine hours, nine minutes - if you don't quit."

"Thanks for that." Jason rubs the bridge of his nose and takes off his glasses, tossing them onto the table. Dean and Sam, Dean and Sam ... weird cases and strange M.O.'s ... Novak watches him think with impassive blue eyes and finally, finally, it comes to him.

"Winchester," he says aloud, startled. "The goddamn Winchester brothers!(Novak actually has the nerve to scowl at Jason, probably for using God's name

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[daylightfire]

Fantastic! Wonderful fic! You created some great OCs. I love all the details and I absolutely love the last line. :)

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[amor_remanet]

Oh, that was magnificent. I loved it. ♥

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[orockthro]

*shudders*
That was beautiful. Thank you for finishing it so well! <3
*hugs*
:D
I keep wanting to know, though, if Jason will peruse this further now that he knows the boys are alive...
;)
(/shameless hope for a follow up fic)

Re: Final Part (9)

[liliaeth]

"I'm pretty sure I saw him - well - spread his wings and just - fly away."

Poor detective, I'm sure he's going to be heading to church a bit more often in the future*g*

And for some reason, I've got the idea that if Jason isn't about to start going after the Winchesters again, he'll probably be more inclined to stop smoking :-)

I loved this from start to finish, wonderful fic

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[olympia_m]

I really loved this! thank you!

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[control_paradox]

Oh my god, that was AMAZING. I'd tell you my favorite parts, but it was pretty much the entire fic. This would make a really, really awesome epic-length fic...

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[girl_wonder]

Ack! This was really awesome, I was so engaged while reading it!

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[flitting_west]

Wow! Love this story! Great job with every single character (and all the other little details, too). Thank you!

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[maychorian]

SO awesome. :D I loved it to bits.

And then Castiel flew to the brothers and collapsed in their arms and they laid him on the bed and called him Mr. Comatose some more and all was right in the Winchester-plus-one world.

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[sayoes]

This is a great outsider point of view. I love how law officials are always baffled by the Supernatural.

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[snowrose]

This was fantastic!

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[muser71]

That was great. Thanks for posting it.