[fic][dgure] Village of Dreams (2/?)

[vikki]

Village of Dreams (2/5)
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by vikki
Warnings: gore, sexual themes in later chapters
Summary: A village in France is assaulted by near-daily severe thunderstorms. Convinced it's a piece of Innocence, the Dark Church sends Allen and Rinali to investigate. Intrigue! Serial killers! And . . . people General Cross owes money to? Uh oh

Comments

[white_arc]

Oh, this is good.

I like the dark but not so heavy atmosphere you've incorporated into the story and the characterization of Lenalee and ecspecially Allen are very entertaining.

I look forward to where you lead them next in the story (though considering the date you wrote the first chapter it may take awhile, but I can wait).

It's nice to read a story like this with Allen and Lenalee to remember the good (or not as depressing) times before the whole 14th/Central thing began sinking it's claws in more.

[authoressarktos]

This really is an amazing story! You've got Lenalee and Allen down completely so far, and I liked the suspence you've managed to cultivate in this mission so far...it's very effective.