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vigilante_wake

The Further Adventures of Superwoman

Jan 21, 2008 04:50

SOMEONE was bugging me about writing more of the characters from Earth-11. It was arch_schatten.

I have a few more odds and ends to post when I'm home and have access to my laptop, including a something with Olivia Queen.

Title: Sodium Thiopental
Pairings/Characters: Clara Kent/Louis Lane
Rating: PG
Word Count: 603
Author's Notes: This was originally a scene ( Read more... )

louis lane, superwoman, fanfic, clara kent

Comments 6

jij January 22 2008, 14:00:38 UTC

Sorry, still snickering about the rooster line. But I think my favorite part was the sudden, clanging collision of the glasses cliches--the one where they hide the secret identity, and the one where they're taken off to reveal the woman behind them is pretty! :) What a great reversal of expectations that cou8ld only work with a genderswitched story. :)

For some reason I also love the fact that Louis has to stand on tiptoes to kiss Clara...and that he misses. It just feels very right, somehow. :)

vigilante_wake January 23 2008, 01:09:15 UTC

Sorry, still snickering about the rooster line.

My mom grew up on a farm, so maybe it was more of a threat? : )

But I think my favorite part was the sudden, clanging collision of the glasses cliches--the one where they hide the secret identity, and the one where they're taken off to reveal the woman behind them is pretty!

Thank you! I think that's my favorite bit as well. Of course, Clara in pretty with her glasses, but Louis is a little clueless. He is a guy :P

For some reason I also love the fact that Louis has to stand on tiptoes to kiss Clara...

She's taller than him, of course. : )

Thank you for reading this and commenting!

taro_twist January 26 2008, 18:05:53 UTC

Eeeeeeeee, so awesome, SO AWESOME! Thank you so much for such a great birthday present. :D I am addicted to your gender-switch universe now. Addicted, I say!!!!

Poor Clara having to deal with a drugged up Louis at the beginning ...

Louis let his left arm dangle and laid his head against her breasts.

"Mmm..."

Clara felt her cheeks flush.

Oh my! O_O That is such a guy thing to do, though, LOL.

Aww, but it was so sweet when Louis pulled her glasses off! I love the "whoa, she's pretty!" without glasses thing, lol, but somehow I didn't see it coming here--I really thought she was busted! And it's great that Clara didn't think to stop him with her superspeed until after the fact ... what a classic Clark moment. X) (And Wanda West! Ahh, I wanna see Wally in this 'verse!)

I'm with Jen that this felt just right as a kiss between them:

Louis leaned forward on his tiptoes and kissed her. He missed a little, pressing his lips against the corner of her mouth. (And it also gave me Tom Cruise/Katie Holmes images. =P ( ... )

vigilante_wake January 27 2008, 03:23:28 UTC

I blushed so much when I read your comment here and the one you left for Ballroom Blitz! And then I saw your entry in recced_em and just about died from joy. I'm so happy you liked these stories so much!

Oh my! O_O That is such a guy thing to do, though, LOL.

Ha ha! I think Louis was thinking something like "Yay! Big soft things to lay on!" but Clara was terribly embarrassed : )

And it's great that Clara didn't think to stop him with her superspeed until after the fact ... what a classic Clark moment.

I was inspired by the scene in the Superman/Batman Annual where Bruce hits Clark with the dart. Why didn't Clark catch it? Because he's a dork.

And Wanda West! Ahh, I wanna see Wally in this 'verse!

I do think we need to see a meeting of the girl!Justice League, with either Wonder Man or Black Condor as the token male member.

I was researching sodium pentathol because it was used in a scene of the book I'm reading, Gravity's Rainbow. It almost sounds like it gets people really drunk: they feel sleepy, talkative, agreeable. It gives some ( ... )

arch_schatten February 12 2008, 07:58:22 UTC

First off, hello! I'm a the Super Late Commenter! Going through my tabs and wondering if I'll ever catch the flist, but here nontheless!

SOMEONE was bugging me about writing more of the characters from Earth-11. It was arch_schatten.

Hey, hey. No placing blame on ferrets, even if they might be responsible! *grins* I'm glad to see more of Earth-11, and I shall coax more of you in any ways possible!

Her and her Prada footwear. "That's diabolical!"

LOL!!! Prada footwear for Lexi! The devil does indeed wear Prada. ...I want to see Lexi and Helena on a bitchy shopping spree together. They would be... I dunno. My head might explode. Who looks more bomshelltastic? who buys the most expensive shoes? How can Helena find out about Lexi's plans while still seeming innocuous? Also, does Lexi have a tiny dog to compete with Helena's? maybeeee!

I also very fond of Louis stepping on his toes to kiss Clara and missing. It's such a... I dunno, endearing awkward moment :)

"If you stick your lip out like that, a rooster will come and sit on it ( ... )

vigilante_wake February 18 2008, 19:46:13 UTC

Your new icon is so cute! Ferret-heart!

I'm glad to see more of Earth-11, and I shall coax more of you in any ways possible!

I've actually started an Arrow-clan Earth-11 story, but it got stalled while I was dealing with flesh-life stuff. However, I feel like working on it now. Perhaps tonight at work!

The devil does indeed wear Prada.

Bwahaha! Believe it or not, I didn't even think of that! I think I originally used Chanel or Gucci or something, and then changed it to Prada because it "sounded right." Now I know why!

I want to see Lexi and Helena on a bitchy shopping spree together.

Oh man. They would be trying to out-do each other the entire time.

"I just bought a vintage Vera Wang cocktail dress!"

"Well, I just bought diamond earrings from Tiffanys!"

I bet Batwoman would sneak into the dressing room to steal Lexi's Coach purse and search it for evidence.

.....what?? LOL! that's fantastic, and terrifying! A rooster, seriously?I guess my grandmother used to say that to my mom when she was little. They lived on a farm, so ( ... )