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ONESHOT; To get back to where you are

Jan 19, 2010 03:35

To get back to where you are ; JaeMin
roselit @ paperside
romance
PG ; 3002w.
This is when words matter most.
A/N: Literally set in the world described here, with partial inspiration from this. Title from lyrics to "All This Time" by OneRepublic. Beta'd by mcgrjc6 & dedicated to anyone who's ever loved this pairing. ♥

( It’s minimalism at its finest, Jaejoong thinks as he swallows the rest of his coffee. )

p: jaejoong/changmin, #access: public, rating: pg, #fic: oneshot, oneshot: to get back to where you are

Comments 45

mcgrjc6 January 19 2010, 09:07:27 UTC

YES YOU USED ONE OF MY FAV LINES AS THE TAG LINE! I WIN HAHAHAHAHHA!

This world is just amazing! guh! Please write more in this verse! I want more Jaemin!!!! ;~; and yes of course you would have missed writing your OTP!!!!

I just love the story and the whole idea of having limited amounts of words, makes the rest all that much more important...

going to specifics now...
Certainly not you MIN YOUR SNARKY I HAVE MISSED IT! YOU MUST HAVE YOUR HYUNG AROUND OR ELSE I'M SURE YOU'D EXPLODE FROM SARCASM!!!! and to think Jaejoong even for a second thought he could beat Min at video games. tsk tsk.

He learns that Changmin actually likes reading sci-fi novels; no, not fantasy, there’s a difference, Changmin stressed at the time. I really loved this part cause its just so...idk you've put all of their personalities and information in one sentence so I really like it :D ( ... )

roselit January 19 2010, 14:53:09 UTC

it happens to be one of my favorite lines too! ;d i think i knew from the beginning that i was going to use that one. :D

i love this world too, but idk if i have enough creative juices to write a series from this, LOL. XD; but we'll see. :D!

i'm so happy you spotted the bit of snark and all the qualities of their characters! it always makes me happy to hear anything related to my characterization. ;A;

LOLOL i should've known that would've been something you'd want. XD! that would have to be saved for a later visit to changmin's apartment, you know. ;d

you honestly can't blame me; i wasn't stopping you from crawling into bed and sleeping. 8D ♥

cherrieeme January 19 2010, 10:49:21 UTC

ARGHH!

i like i like i like i like :D

roselit January 19 2010, 14:54:29 UTC

i'm glad you do! :D thank you! ♥

winged_kame January 19 2010, 10:59:05 UTC

I really enjoyed this! I think it's really well done! Love this pairing, too!

roselit January 19 2010, 14:55:04 UTC

i'm happy you think so! :DD thank you! ♥

izanamiwiles January 19 2010, 11:34:45 UTC

OH yOU got to write more of this please ^^
I loved it! It's sweet, but there's a hint of sadness or melancholy to it, that makes it even better. <3
But you can't leave them like that, seriously! ^^
please please continue this *puppy eyes*
and thanx a lot for writing this =^^=
*hug*

roselit January 19 2010, 14:56:14 UTC

haha, i'd love to delve more into this world, but it all depends on my creative juices, so to speak. ;d but it makes me happy to hear that you loved this so much! thank you! ♥

kurogoma January 19 2010, 12:23:39 UTC

like the concept of few words. it makes what they do say all the more precious.

jaemin is always awesome, hope you will write them again soon. ♥ :)

roselit January 19 2010, 14:57:07 UTC

exactly. :) it's endearing in its own way, i think. ♥

thank you! i hope to write them again soon, too. ♥♥