Naruto fanfiction: Behind the Camera

Oct 31, 2006 21:16

Title: Behind the Camera 
Genre: General, romance, basically fluff with a splash of good ole' angst.
Words (including theme names): 2,652
Rating: PG
Warnings: AU, wh00t.

Will I ever get rid of my NejiLee obsession?! D: *is sad* Oh, and hopefully this will contine on being a chapter story rather than a one-shot with a weird, cliff-hangerish ending. XD

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stillfindinggod November 1 2006, 05:56:24 UTC
“Gif cis cu Eji,” Tenten mumbled handing him a memory disk... Here you fail to mention that she has the stylus in her mouth before she's talking to Lee. I believe that you say she does this after the dialogue. You may want to change that (but its not that big a deal)?

“Ah, sorry, I didn’t realize I had the stylus in my hand when I walk talking. I just had to take a note of one of his pictures. lack end quotation. >_>;;

Now that Im done nitpicking, ZOMGNEWSTORY?THISISGREAT! *throws party like items pickles, popcorn, and porn! into the air with a festive abandon* This is wonderful! Your story is wonderful! I want to see more~! Ple~ase?!

^___^ I love Lee~ And I really want to see how you'll have them interact. And probably I just want to see how you'll characterize Neji. ^_^ Thanks for the story! I hope to see more!

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vietoftheusa November 1 2006, 20:26:26 UTC
Eek! I had a feeling I might have trouble with that one. I was being a lazy fart to look over it thouroughly. u.u; YOU ARE LOVING FOR NITPICKING!!!!!!11111ONONEONEWUN :DDDDD

*tackles teh pr0n* <3<3 ;D Porn is like, teh ultimate luv. =D I don't know about another chapter. I don't have a very good track record with completing chapter stories. Sowwie....still, I'll try. ^-^ It'll take oh...a year or so though. XD

Oh my gosh, I don't wanna even think about how I'll write Neji. o.o; I just hope I don't make him uber!emo!Neji. If I do that, I won't be able to tell the difference between him and Sasuke. XD

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greenlemonapple November 1 2006, 14:22:11 UTC
Maa, Kat-sama, stop nitpicking already. XP You're scaring the poor girl away from us (read: you) ~ ♥

And I would resent that, because I really want to see more of this. X3 It's an interesting plot, I can so see Neji as a model.

.. Ack, you make me want to watch The Devil wears Prada once again because of all this stylish modelly atmosphere thing. °_°; Usually I don't fancy AUs, but this is really good. <3

Please continue? *does the Puppy EyesTM*

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vietoftheusa November 1 2006, 20:29:31 UTC
It's all good, I totally need all the nitpicking. My grammer suxorz.

I wanted to see it so badly, but when I went to the dollar *cough*two*cough* theatre, it wasn't there no more. D: This is my first AU, so I'm glad a non-AU reader read it. XD SELF ESTEEM HAS RISEN! TeH aWeSoMe PoWeR oF yOuTh!!!adfjkkl;lksjfd ^o^

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mistressofrobin November 4 2006, 08:30:09 UTC
I'm really interested to see how this turns out. Hopefully you'll continue it, because I want to see when and how teh NejiLee lurve happens.

Great job, btw. I think you've captured the modeling business well, and Sakura's a scary makeup artist. XD I especially loved the part about the flower, Neji's eyes, and how Lee felt he knew something special about him because of his little observation. ^.^;;

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mistressofrobin November 4 2006, 08:31:58 UTC
One more thing: you will NEVER get rid of your NejiLee obsession because it is BEAUTIFUL/HOT LOVE. Just thought I'd answer your question. XPXPXP

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vietoftheusa November 5 2006, 23:53:26 UTC
IF I do even do write this as a chapter story, it'll probably be on the third. I'm still contemplating on it while I finish up my other stories I haven't touched like, umpteen years. XD

American's Next Top Model suddenly sparked the idea of a model!AU Naruto ficcy. Darn Tyra Banks. XDDD

Why don't I see YOU posting anything? That one fic of yours had me rolling on the floor, squealing, but I have yet to see any more NejiLee goodness spout from your brain. =/

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mistressofrobin November 6 2006, 01:24:50 UTC
Le sigh, guilty as charged. ^.^;; I've got little ideas running around my brain, but they just don't want to come out as coherant fic. I'll try, though. I've got one or two I want to develop, but we'll see. Ha ha, we should have a race, see who pops up with something the quickest or something dorky like that. XP

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ithilgwath November 20 2006, 06:29:18 UTC
hehe this is cute. is there more?

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vietoftheusa December 3 2006, 23:22:58 UTC
It's a slim possibility. XDXD

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greenlemonapple December 3 2006, 12:26:11 UTC
Hey hey. This fanfic. Needs a continuation. Pronto. :D

Sincerely yours, moi and moi's girlfriend ~ ♥

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vietoftheusa January 1 2007, 05:46:44 UTC
I have like, 200 words written down for chapter 2 if that helps any. XDXDXD

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