Barely Breathing - Chapter 17

[victorianxrose]

Comments

[mariana_lico]

Like I said before, no need to rush things.

And Ville was so sweet taking her to see My Chemical Romance, loved it. ^^

[victorianxrose]

Thanks for the excellent editing! I just couldn't resist a moment like this.

[cherimorton]

uh, DUH we want you to keep writing! lol. we need them to get together, but the pace is natural, so i'll wait. tapping my fingers impatiently tho... i'll wait :D

[victorianxrose]

Hahahaha, I'll make sure to keep writing then.

[have_666_mercy]

yes, please keep on writing.
i loved that ville took olivia to see mcr in the rehearsal studio. way cool surprise. it is always a plus when someone i used to know turns up in a fic i am reading. gives me just a little pulse of reality in fiction.

[victorianxrose]

...You knew the guys of MCR??? Because if so, you are like my new favorite person... yes, I have some fan girl issues I need to work on.

Anywho, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[candytoots]

Loving this story, It is good that you are taking things slow with the relationship, makes it more realistic with the age gap! x

[victorianxrose]

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!

[vhvhim]

How very nice of him, meeting favorite band in their own rehearsal space would be so much fun, entertaining as well!

[victorianxrose]

Thanks for reading!