POEM!

Oct 18, 2005 16:25

I wrote this about a month ago...I don't remember writing most of it, but...I think its done ( Read more... )

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skinu October 18 2005, 23:05:07 UTC
Unfortunatelly, any critisism i would attempt to convey would not be constructive ! As there is nothing that i find lacking in your poems. Very good.

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vellon October 19 2005, 02:28:56 UTC
Damn you and your poems.

Magnificent imagery. I can just see the black flickery shadow on a wall, as the soul walks through the halls of it's confinement. Dancing and twirling, as it slowly screams and melts and changes and blurs. Enveloping my view, and there in the middle is the jagged yet beautiful smile of ol' lucifer's view of reality.

You're a little beyond my meager skills. But keep writing, so I can learn. It will be like fooseball.

^__________~

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