oddmonster, very interesting story. I was waiting for a few different things that came to mind and at the end, in my mind, hearing the same sentence figured Crockett fell asleep. I enjoyed the imagination, the pictured discriptions. You did a great job. Going to do a sequel or just leave it to the imagination....lol...oh and don't forget another part of the Sonny and Gina story......thanks for posting this it was nice to bring up the site to a good story. Sue
Creeepy. I like the cameo from The Gentlemen, who are the creepiest thing to come out of the Buffyverse. It felt a little like that bar scene from The Shining, all normal and insane all at the same time. I loved Crockett's observations about the life cycle of clubs and how that came back in the end. Nightclubs are an underused spot for creepiness. Bravo!
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PHEW - you're not a huckleberry!
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I get busy for a few days and LOOK WHAT HPPENED!
[scurries off to read... or more accurately, scurries off to bed with bookmark to read tomorrow when have more braincells]
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and mirrors! Nice!
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