They do it with mirrors

Oct 09, 2007 22:33

Title: Call of Crockthulu (1/1 ( Read more... )

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abbeyrd62561 October 10 2007, 04:00:20 UTC
oddmonster, very interesting story. I was waiting for a few different things that came to mind and at the end, in my mind, hearing the same sentence figured Crockett fell asleep. I enjoyed the imagination, the pictured discriptions. You did a great job. Going to do a sequel or just leave it to the imagination....lol...oh and don't forget another part of the Sonny and Gina story......thanks for posting this it was nice to bring up the site to a good story. Sue

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oddmonster October 10 2007, 12:15:53 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I don't think there will be a sequel, though, I did try to leave it open-ended. Thanks for your kind comments.

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Excellent!! hellocleveland October 10 2007, 04:16:32 UTC
Each time i read this, i like it better

PHEW - you're not a huckleberry!

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Re: Excellent!! oddmonster October 10 2007, 12:11:57 UTC
Hey thanks! I think your beta really pulled a couple key parts of the story together.

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amonitrate October 12 2007, 01:56:40 UTC
omgomgomgomg

I get busy for a few days and LOOK WHAT HPPENED!

[scurries off to read... or more accurately, scurries off to bed with bookmark to read tomorrow when have more braincells]

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amonitrate October 12 2007, 21:17:30 UTC
Creeepy. I like the cameo from The Gentlemen, who are the creepiest thing to come out of the Buffyverse. It felt a little like that bar scene from The Shining, all normal and insane all at the same time. I loved Crockett's observations about the life cycle of clubs and how that came back in the end. Nightclubs are an underused spot for creepiness. Bravo!

and mirrors! Nice!

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oddmonster October 13 2007, 02:26:23 UTC
Thanks! I definitely thought about The Shining while I was writing all the inside stuff. I'm glad it came out creepy and not just weird.

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amonitrate October 13 2007, 02:27:52 UTC
definitely creepy. those possessed dancers - creepy.

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amonitrate October 18 2007, 00:39:27 UTC
creepy and weird. My favorite combination.

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