3. Morgenmuffel

Mar 03, 2022 16:38

Monday, February 1st-7:45 a.m.

1,849 words. Approximate reading time: 9 minutes, 20 seconds.

The bedroom lights turned on, slowly brightening as Michael’s handheld tablet began playing soft instrumental music. The music swelled with the lights, welcoming Michael and his wife Cindy to the new day.

With a swift motion, Michael reached a hand out from ( Read more... )

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adoptedwriter March 3 2022, 23:30:12 UTC
Oh gosh! Wonder how he filled out the board. I love this being all dystopian and COVID-esque.

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viagra March 3 2022, 23:59:35 UTC
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dadi March 4 2022, 06:08:03 UTC
Wheeeew....scary!

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viagra March 4 2022, 12:53:24 UTC
I know! I don't know what I'd do in that situation for sure...

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stellinasusan March 4 2022, 08:16:16 UTC
This is scary,but sadly even possible,this was a well written piece, and unique in its approach,I enjoyed it very much,well done x

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viagra March 4 2022, 12:54:14 UTC
Thank you :)

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mollywheezy March 5 2022, 18:10:30 UTC
Very powerful!

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viagra March 7 2022, 15:37:24 UTC
Thank you! :)

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bleodswean March 6 2022, 00:26:20 UTC
Perfect, perfect ending, S! You're really doing a strong job of depicting the 1984-esque future that could have been Covid....

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viagra March 7 2022, 15:40:01 UTC
Thank you :) This is one that I think is going to maybe take some re-writes; I'm happy with the concept but not so much the execution - I feel like I shoehorned in the topic a little too much. Definitely the ending is staying the same; I like leaving things where the reader can finish the story how they choose.

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