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vhii1217

The General and a Vagabond [Part 3]

Aug 24, 2013 13:21

Title: The General and a Vagabond [Part 3]
Pairings: HoMin, brotherhood!YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None. Well, a very brief swords clash.
Genre: Drama
Word count: 17,424
Summary: Yunho is a royal general in a break after winning a war.( Too bad, all good days were bound to end. )

tvxq, homin, fanfic, oneshot

Comments 28

snow_meow August 24 2013, 12:29:34 UTC

I love the plot and the way the story was written.

Yunho is forever a caring, loving and just person.
It was quite predictable that in the end that he will leave with Changmin.

I am glad that Jaejoong is really a brother to Yunho and that Yunho's father realizes the truth and protected his own son.

vhii1217 August 26 2013, 05:38:46 UTC

Hello! I'm glad you like the plot. True that I did have at least three ways with which the story could end and finally resorted to choosing the happiest (and subsequently, most predictable) alternatives xD

Thank you for reading and sharing your opinion!

happymystar August 24 2013, 13:05:37 UTC

Oh my god...... this is such a beautiful story.
It's very in depth, and I love the interaction between Yunho & Changmin.

vhii1217 August 26 2013, 05:39:27 UTC

Hello, glad you like this! Thank you for reading!

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vhii1217 August 26 2013, 05:41:02 UTC

Hi! Thank you for reading. Really glad you find this story realistic! :)

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vhii1217 August 26 2013, 05:43:55 UTC

"You showed the build-up of trust between them so well." -> wow, really happy you find it like that! I was kinda afraid i didn't manage to get the belonging feeling right. Yunho's so lucky and he deserves all the love, doesn't he? <3

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thought!

ore_ryousama August 24 2013, 15:35:18 UTC

Words don't do justice on how magnificent this work of yours.

The idea itself is refreshing, and the delivery more importantly is consistent with the mood and the tone that you built in the plot. There's this deep bond surpassing mere romance between Yunho and Changmin here. And I like it you bring it that way through the end.

All in all, it's a delightful story to read. One of my favorites :) do write more in the future~ <3

vhii1217 August 26 2013, 05:48:28 UTC

I think your comment is about the very thing that makes my world go round today ♥

Really happy that the deeper meaning in their bond can be felt. I always thought there is a basic feeling of need and trust, more than romantic interest, that glue two people to each other.

Thank you, really thank you <3