Year 2 A.E. -- Salutatonis Liminis

[vesta_aurelia]

When you arrived in town
          you left your doors wide open
          hoping we would all wander in and out
          see the place
          and love it

Gradually

Comments

[p1kap1ka]

and THAT is what I love about your work. Great rhythm. great repetition. No overexplaining, letting me bring.. whteveri bring to the work, and acknowledging that the reader's contribution doesn't dilute the image... and a nice clean ambiguity to leave with.

DAMN FINE.