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vespaer

Fic: The Chronicle of Perdition

Jan 18, 2011 22:31

CHAPTER FIFTEEN: Deep Water (Part One)
Characters: Sylar/Claire
Summary: It happened so fast Claire wondered how she'd ever managed to underestimate the surety and swiftness of Sylar's determination.
Rating: PG13 for some language
Spoilers: Season 4 stuff
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sylar, claire

Comments 7

thegreyhawke January 20 2011, 02:16:36 UTC

UNFF!!
Don't know if I've ever commented here, but I'm a big fan of your series.
I love your Sylar. Love the note how patience was needed when dealing with Sylar, love how Sylar thinks, love the use of the word 'blathering' oddly enough....
Just....UNF. I can't form words.
Please do continue! ASAP!

vespaer January 20 2011, 02:39:30 UTC

Awww thanks!!! It's Sylar I worry about the most, so this is good to hear. His voice is super duper tricky because he has such a dual-sided nature and sometimes it's easy to listen to one side and accidentally ignore the other. And as luck and coincidence would have it, I got started on Ch16 tonight =) My life right now is tumultuous - have some heavy emotional stuff going on - so my meager beginning got a slight interruption due to some stupid bullshit, but nonetheless, the chapter she be started =) Come hell or high water I PLAN on seeing this fic through it's fruition (even if it is almost a year old now... wheee!)

Thank you so so so SO much again - you've made my night when I really needed it =)

vespaer January 20 2011, 02:40:13 UTC

(oh and your icon is badass =D)

alerena January 20 2011, 22:20:38 UTC

Yes, yes, yes! And here we have another chapter: D I am very happy that you write again ( ... )

vespaer January 21 2011, 02:06:44 UTC

'I am very happy that you write again. ' YAY thank you! I missed all you guys! =)

'I am glad that it starts to fall into place.' Heeeeee yes it really is!! I have a few more little tricks to pull out of my hat, but this plot, she be movin' right along!

'the ice between Sylar adn Claire finally begin to break' Oh yes, this is very very true. Things are about to get a little warmer between them pretty darned soon =)

'Really great scene on the boat between Sylar and Claire.' Thank you, thank you very much! It's a tough line to walk - to give them progress, but make it believable.

'Where were the men with guns when they needed them?” LOL, Yee! Noah to the rescue : )' HEEEE I like the way you think!

'I know that „Sylar” is quite right about Noah, but somehow I can not think of him as a villain. I admit that I have a big weakness for him.' Have no fear, girl, I feel the same way - Noah was actually my favorite character on the show. And while he's done bad stuff, he's no more villain in this fic than Sylar is =) This fic ( ... )

kaasknot January 21 2011, 19:06:21 UTC

Perhaps this woman was the key… ahhh, your evil, dastardly plan comes almost to fruition. More like seed-planting, but I see where the trend is heading, now.

, "the registration would be public. The United States Government would compile his list of victims for him. oh jesus, oh ick ick ick. The dude's bitten off more than he can chew with Leviathan and is trying to keep it fed. Like Audrey II.

"in that case, you better come with me - I think I may have found something." Argh, no you can't end it there!!

power of suggestion Oh, that's why Sylar wasn't fighting. That managed to escape me last chapter.

Dude. I had my Claire bite my Gabriel, too. We need to stop writing the same thing.

I can't figure out what to say about this next chunk of happening, because it's too big, too much. Progress forward, of a Sylaire-flavored variety, and I'll carry on.

Sylar was getting irritated. You won't... like me, when I'm irritated...

"Surely you must know," Sylar smirked in his typical smarmy way, "that I can stop your men from firing." Oh yes ( ... )

vespaer January 21 2011, 20:04:48 UTC

'The dude's bitten off more than he can chew with Leviathan and is trying to keep it fed.' Damn straight. And Sylar ain't the only psycho he's provoked. There's a couple more in this bag of tricks. This guy's really playing with fire.

'Argh, no you can't end it there!!' WHEEE I happen to be writing that continuation right now =)

'That managed to escape me last chapter.' That's okay, I didnt really cover it well in the last chapter, either. It's pretty integral to the plot coming up.

'We need to stop writing the same thing.' Birds of a feather, and all that ;-) Can we help it if we both think he's delicious???

'We know it and we love it. And I have to say this is an awesome bid. ' Awww thanks and mmm the way he glares from under that brow guh... There is no better glare than a Sylar glare.

'I take it back, Monique---you're a saint.' This made me LOL =)

'Just that you did a really good job at connecting together the cock-up that was Season 1's and Season 3's nearly contradictory attempts at explaining why Sylar Went ( ... )