Residue from Last Night (2/2)

[veryspecial0ne]

Title: Residue from Last Night (2/2)
Author: veryspecial0ne
Rating: R
Word count: ~3000
Disclaimer: Nothing has ever been less mine than Community.
Spoilers: Through the end of Season 2.
Summary: He refuses to feel inappropriate though, because how could it possibly be his fault that someone tried to break into Annie's apartment and that there was

Comments

[fan_fic_adikt]

Loving it! Will there be a sequel?

[veryspecial0ne]

Thank you! You know, up until I posted it last night, I didn't think there would be a sequel, but an idea for a 5-times fic did strike me that will have to do with the deal they make at the very end of the story. So I'll have to start working on it and see!

[rufeepeach]

That was total awesomesauce :)

[veryspecial0ne]

Oooh, I got a gif(t)! :D

See what I did there?

...Okay, I'll stick to writing fic and not jokes.

[rufeepeach]

Am I the only one who can't stop staring at it? They're so frikkin cute!

[wallows]

So I was leaving work for another work related event I wasn't too keen on attending when I saw that you updated this story and I squealed (yes, maybe there was seat hopping too) that I had this J/A delectability to look forward to tonight. And I absolutely j'adooooore this!

You accurately depicted Jeff and Britta's relationship with its layers and then the contrasts with Jeff and Annie's, with its nuances, and among other things, just that Annie simply confounds him. You just stayed true to everybody. I practically yelled "Noooo!" When he had that flashback, but it just felt real and added to the story.

Stormy makeouts! Incredibly sexy and cute and sexy in turns in that inimitable way only Annie and Jeff can be. Hello, purple belter. I love that detail of her pajamas piled neatly in a corner and that he laughs at it. THIS story just feels like champagne, very effervescent-y. A delight-a-rama!

"Tonight will just be this weird thing that happened that they don't really talk about." Ha

[veryspecial0ne]

Wow, thank you! I'm so glad the things I was aiming to accomplish came across to you and that you liked it so much! Now that I've finished one Community fic and I have more time on my hands (just graduated from college) I'm hoping to be able to write some more.

[stephanierb]

What a fabulous finish. I love the image of Jeff restless in bed, trying to relax and fall asleep, but being unable to Annie out of is head.

And Annie's little gotcha at the end was perfect. I can just imagine the look on his face after she closed the door. Haha.

I love the flow of your writing and your character voices are spot on. I really, really hope you continue to write for these two.

[veryspecial0ne]

I hope I do too. Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it!

[veryspecial0ne]

Thank you! I think I've kind of figured out the kind of writing that I'm good at, and I know it's not in the same realm as the show comedically, but I'm glad the moments I tried to slip in for lightness worked for you!